Hired Assasin
Comments & Ratings
Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
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CrowSkull![]() |
May 7, 2012 | god i love your stories :) | |
infernalbovine![]() |
Nov 28, 2010 | ||
KingMalice![]() |
May 9, 2010 | ||
Firestarter![]() |
Oct 7, 2009 | ||
roybelkin![]() |
Dec 24, 2008 | I think a few of the pictures were a bit sucky but over all it was okay. | |
chipmunkman![]() |
Sep 5, 2008 | I thought this was AWESOME! | |
theterror95![]() |
Jun 29, 2008 | tfc96@hotmail.com |
nice story but i died hahahaha im waiting on ur new 1 u were talkin about|
hep0005![]() |
Feb 5, 2008 | It's an okay story, but you shouldn't have included the pics. | |
kerplin![]() |
Jul 15, 2007 | ||
Logan033![]() |
Jun 12, 2007 | P.S. I also love Behind the Badge... |
Wow, that is one of the best stories I have read in who-knows-how-long. Finally someone knows how to right. |
Jargner![]() |
May 19, 2007 | ||
glowworm![]() |
Apr 12, 2007 | ||
blaine![]() |
Mar 6, 2007 | ||
apotheosis![]() |
Jan 14, 2007 | Horrible grammar is a -2 penalty but nice use of images is a +1 bonus and a fun interesting plot leaves you with a 9. | |
mangofox![]() |
Jun 10, 2006 | Good story, but each "job" wasn't unique enough. | |
donteatpoop![]() |
Jun 15, 2005 | Bomb-ass story though. Realy liked it. |
One of your best stories. Being an assassin is sweet. It was action packed with logical choices. Loved it. Only critique is a nitpick critique; Except is not the word you're looking for, it's accept. Except is like "everyone here is lame except me".|
michaelrayholt![]() |
May 22, 2005 | You know me, NCP: I hate bad English. This must've been some of your earlier work, because I SWEAR I remember your grammatical and spelling skills were far better than this. | |
gpshaw![]() |
Apr 23, 2005 | Not bad I like the whole mob thing. | |
razman![]() |
Feb 11, 2005 | ||
Dracula![]() |
Dec 31, 2004 | ||
jeffisthebest![]() |
Sep 20, 2004 | Very good, but I don't know anything about this stuff | |
KatsuyaJonouchi![]() |
Jun 14, 2004 | Good introduction it grabs the readers attention. The illustrations help that even more. Overall good work. | |
EnderWiggin![]() |
Jan 9, 2004 | The pictures kick a**. This is the best illustrated story on the site. | |
Kierkegaard![]() |
Jan 6, 2004 |