Hired Assasin

Written by NCPolice55571 / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
CrowSkull	May 7, 2012	god i love your stories :) by CrowSkull on May 7, 2012
infernalbovine	Nov 28, 2010	by infernalbovine on Nov 28, 2010
KingMalice	May 9, 2010	by KingMalice on May 9, 2010
Firestarter	Oct 7, 2009	by Firestarter on Oct 7, 2009
roybelkin	Dec 24, 2008	I think a few of the pictures were a bit sucky but over all it was okay. by roybelkin on Dec 24, 2008
chipmunkman	Sep 5, 2008	I thought this was AWESOME! by chipmunkman on Sep 5, 2008
theterror95	Jun 29, 2008	nice story but i died hahahaha im waiting on ur new 1 u were talkin about tfc96@hotmail.com by theterror95 on Jun 29, 2008
hep0005	Feb 5, 2008	It's an okay story, but you shouldn't have included the pics. by hep0005 on Feb 5, 2008
kerplin	Jul 15, 2007	by kerplin on Jul 15, 2007
Logan033	Jun 12, 2007	Wow, that is one of the best stories I have read in who-knows-how-long. Finally someone knows how to right. P.S. I also love Behind the Badge... by Logan033 on Jun 12, 2007
Jargner	May 19, 2007	by Jargner on May 19, 2007
glowworm	Apr 12, 2007	by glowworm on Apr 12, 2007
blaine	Mar 6, 2007	by blaine on Mar 6, 2007
apotheosis	Jan 14, 2007	Horrible grammar is a -2 penalty but nice use of images is a +1 bonus and a fun interesting plot leaves you with a 9. by apotheosis on Jan 14, 2007
mangofox	Jun 10, 2006	Good story, but each "job" wasn't unique enough. by mangofox on Jun 10, 2006
donteatpoop	Jun 15, 2005	One of your best stories. Being an assassin is sweet. It was action packed with logical choices. Loved it. Only critique is a nitpick critique; Except is not the word you're looking for, it's accept. Except is like "everyone here is lame except me". Bomb-ass story though. Realy liked it. by donteatpoop on Jun 15, 2005
michaelrayholt	May 22, 2005	You know me, NCP: I hate bad English. This must've been some of your earlier work, because I SWEAR I remember your grammatical and spelling skills were far better than this. by michaelrayholt on May 22, 2005
gpshaw	Apr 23, 2005	Not bad I like the whole mob thing. by gpshaw on Apr 23, 2005
razman	Feb 11, 2005	by razman on Feb 11, 2005
Dracula	Dec 31, 2004	by Dracula on Dec 31, 2004
jeffisthebest	Sep 20, 2004	Very good, but I don't know anything about this stuff by jeffisthebest on Sep 20, 2004
KatsuyaJonouchi	Jun 14, 2004	Good introduction it grabs the readers attention. The illustrations help that even more. Overall good work. by KatsuyaJonouchi on Jun 14, 2004
EnderWiggin	Jan 9, 2004	The pictures kick a**. This is the best illustrated story on the site. by EnderWiggin on Jan 9, 2004
Kierkegaard	Jan 6, 2004	by Kierkegaard on Jan 6, 2004

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