The Smartest/Dumbest Hostage

Written by Muffinator / MA: Mature Audiences - Adult / 5.00 (1 ratings) (1)
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TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan		 Jul 26, 2011
Unlike the stories I have come across in the past. This possessed a coherent plotline, perfect Grammar and Spelling, and it actually made sense.

Muffinator.


There are only 11 rooms in the entire story. That's what I call unfinished. So points must deplete, I would give it a four, but as this will never get any more reviews, I'll give it a 5, plus for the potential this story doesn't lack.
by TheCandyMan on Jul 26, 2011

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