Typical day of a HITMAN

Written by deltasabre / MA: Mature Audiences - Adult / 7.75 (4 ratings) (4)
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Author Rating Date Comment
Yaya1314
Yaya1314		 Mar 5, 2011
Would be better if it was finished
by Yaya1314 on Mar 5, 2011
MegaProto
MegaProto		 Jun 26, 2008
I was expecting a lot worse.
But, once I got over the lack of paragraphs, it wasn't all that bad.
by MegaProto on Jun 26, 2008
EndMaster
EndMaster		 Jan 11, 2008
Not bad, but space out some paragraphs to make your story easier to read next time.
by EndMaster on Jan 11, 2008
Muffinator
Muffinator		 Oct 30, 2007
Muffins gives you a 10!
by Muffinator on Oct 30, 2007

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