The Roundhouse

Written by dryates / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 6.50 (6 ratings) (6)
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Author Rating Date Comment
Lackofmop
Lackofmop		 Jul 21, 2013
Amazing.
by Lackofmop on Jul 21, 2013
KingMalice
KingMalice		 Oct 16, 2010
It was funny
by KingMalice on Oct 16, 2010
mal99
mal99		 Apr 20, 2010
by mal99 on Apr 20, 2010
Calen
Calen		 Jan 21, 2008
Just because the story made me laugh, and I learned something new today because of it.
A few things actually.
A. Do something awesome and you can make phones appear on the ceiling.
B. Throwing muffins is fun.
C. Piles of goop can make the best pool players.
by Calen on Jan 21, 2008
Vesnicie
Vesnicie		 Oct 7, 2007
Uneven and unsure of itself. What is this story trying to be? I can tell from your longer rooms that you have the capacity to do far better than this.
by Vesnicie on Oct 7, 2007
michaelrayholt
michaelrayholt		 Oct 7, 2007
It's like fast food... a bit tasty, but over far too quickly.

Take some real time on your next work.
by michaelrayholt on Oct 7, 2007

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