Questerman

Written by paytrocks / G: General Audiences / 3.25 (4 ratings) (4)
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Author Rating Date Comment
Lackofmop
Lackofmop		 Jul 20, 2013
This is actually decent, and much more creative than most things seen on the site. But still needs a [i]lot[/i] of work.
by Lackofmop on Jul 20, 2013
Calen
Calen		 Jan 18, 2008
This story needs 5 things
1. A plot.
2. Humor.
3. Grammar
4. Longer rooms
5. More rooms
by Calen on Jan 18, 2008
apotheosis
apotheosis		 Sep 26, 2007
There really isn't much to this story.

My suggestion: Delete the ratings, make it private and then work on it until there is much more substance to the story, then re-release it.

With how short your rooms are, you will probably want several hundred rooms... maybe even into the thousands.
by apotheosis on Sep 26, 2007
donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Sep 12, 2007
I like how you claim that lying ruins the story, but fail to write an actual story.
by donteatpoop on Sep 12, 2007

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