Mediocre Moose Maulings!!

Written by AllmightyFluffy / R: Restricted - Adult / 8.67 (3 ratings) (3)
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TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan		 May 31, 2011
Hahaha. I loved it thoroughly. I read every room even. It kept me entertained long enough. It was actually rather funny.
by TheCandyMan on May 31, 2011
EndMaster
EndMaster		 Jan 3, 2011
This was an okay story and there was enough to keep me entertained. My only major complaint would be the emoticons placed in the various endings of the story or in the choices. Use them all you like on a forum or chatroom, but they detract from story writing, unless you're trying to purposely emulate a chatroom in your story.
by EndMaster on Jan 3, 2011
PredatorKing
PredatorKing		 Jul 10, 2010
This is pretty cool
by PredatorKing on Jul 10, 2010
PredatorKing
PredatorKing		 Jul 10, 2010
This is pretty cool
by PredatorKing on Jul 10, 2010

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