ninja lengend

Written by bloo / G: General Audiences /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
Creeper909		Jun 3, 2015	That, was pure lunacy. by Creeper909 on Jun 3, 2015
Oct8Yam		May 29, 2014	Lame! by Oct8Yam on May 29, 2014
Ghizzard		May 21, 2008	Bad by Ghizzard on May 21, 2008
westernjesta		Dec 19, 2007	The rooms were crap first of all, no structure at all and bucket loads of mistakes. I thought it couldn't get any worse, but then I found that it was a Naruto story. With all this wound into won you story gets a score of 1 bowl of Ramen soup out of 10. Fuck you Naruto. by westernjesta on Dec 19, 2007
Salamislim		Nov 22, 2007	by Salamislim on Nov 22, 2007
bloo		Oct 19, 2007	this story is great by bloo on Oct 19, 2007
Calen		Sep 4, 2007	Stories with one sentence-two sentences per room will most likely get a rating of under 3, bad grammar will subtract 1-2 points. Remember this, grasshopper. by Calen on Sep 4, 2007
Feinai		Aug 31, 2007	by Feinai on Aug 31, 2007
donteatpoop		Jul 30, 2007	I've scribbled more tangible sentences in the snow with my piss. A shame too, I was looking forward to reading a decent ninja story. by donteatpoop on Jul 30, 2007
apotheosis		Jul 30, 2007	This is not a story. You have no introduction, do not build up any characters... you didn't do anything. You have a couple of bits of poorly constructed fan-fiction plot thrown down onto a website. Also, did you spell legend wrong in the title? Any story with a misspelling IN THE TITLE deserves very low ratings. To sum it up, this is bad. by apotheosis on Jul 30, 2007
Vesnicie		Jul 30, 2007	It's really lame And you're to blame A crying shame It's you I flame by Vesnicie on Jul 30, 2007