Siege!
Comments & Ratings
| Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
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Mudkipper6 |
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Oct 11, 2019 | |
| vegabond213 |
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Jul 23, 2010 | |
| michaelrayholt |
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Jun 27, 2007 | There never has been nor will there ever be enough metal from meteoritic material fallen on the entire Earth (let alone just a singular province) to construct an entire fortress from it. There's not been enough to even COAT a fortress's WALLS with it. Having so little actual material available, it's too severe a suspension of disbelief to ask of the reader. Also, in addition to other forms of siege warfare, most likely all THREE attack methods you mention in the crusader campaign would have been used SIMULTANEOUSLY. To suggest otherwise is laughably ludicrous. If you NEED input of a medieval nature, Apoth, you KNOW that you can come to me. (The English Master just also happens to be the resident medieval expert.) You're better than this, unless I remember incorrectly. |
Vesnicie |
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Jun 17, 2007 | However, this story lacks any sort of character development or variation in narrative delivery (e.g., it has little or no dialogue), which made it very difficult for me to stay interested. Apoth, I really think you can do better than this. I'd also suggest leaving behind your faith vs. religion shtick, because you've really run it into the ground and your point of view on it is monotonously single-sided. |
| Leblanc4prez |
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Jun 17, 2007 | |