Pokemon Revolution

Written by Bryton779 / G: General Audiences /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
Lackofmop		Jul 5, 2013	Lol this is pretty funny... But needs better spelling and grammar. by Lackofmop on Jul 5, 2013
lacko		May 11, 2013	This was cool but at the end, there was an infinite loop -_- by lacko on May 11, 2013
Schoolboy		Nov 16, 2011	ThIs story is horrible! The rooms are only a couple sentences long, if that! Where's the dialogue?! Where's the setting description? Where's the character descriptions? This story get's a 1 from me! by Schoolboy on Nov 16, 2011
SnapSunny		Jun 13, 2007	I don't think this should be considered a story... by SnapSunny on Jun 13, 2007
donteatpoop		Jun 9, 2007	If I saw you right now, I would totally kick you in the poke-balls. What a waste of time. by donteatpoop on Jun 9, 2007
Calen		Jun 6, 2007	What the hell? All three options for starting in Kanto end up having a Meowth steal your Pokemon. Faiiil. ._. by Calen on Jun 6, 2007
Leblanc4prez		Jun 3, 2007	As a pokemon fan i must say i am ashamed to have read this story! by Leblanc4prez on Jun 3, 2007
BringerOfTales		Jun 3, 2007	This is awful. by BringerOfTales on Jun 3, 2007
Vesnicie		Jun 2, 2007	Well, since the story made a little since, I will give it a 2 rather than a 1. You're also lucky I'm a littlze ubzzed right now. hiccup I gotta go catch that hazy Pidgey before it craps on my head! by Vesnicie on Jun 2, 2007
apotheosis		Jun 1, 2007	I'm rating this a 1. I think this is reason enough to do so. You wrote: "Spell everything Correctly, don't make up pokemon, and the story has to make since." These are your directions to the reader. You tell them to spell everything correctly. Right after that, you say "the story has to make [b]since[/b]." Are you kidding me? Look over something before you make it go public. That is an embarrassing mistake. by apotheosis on Jun 1, 2007