The interactive maze

Written by shadowzxv / G: General Audiences /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
Thiefswipe		Jan 4, 2008	by Thiefswipe on Jan 4, 2008
joe60		Jul 26, 2007	by joe60 on Jul 26, 2007
SnapSunny		Jun 13, 2007	At least this wasn't trash. Though it is a maze, it's a rather boring maze. There's no real reason for me to read this other than the fact that i'm bored out of my mind. C'mon, you can be more creative! by SnapSunny on Jun 13, 2007
donteatpoop		Jun 9, 2007	Did you ever start reading a book only to fin that it had less than two sentences on each page? That's what happened to me when I read this. Mazes can be cool, but this should be a story. Most stories have things called "plots", look it up and try to include a plot in your next "story". by donteatpoop on Jun 9, 2007
Leblanc4prez		May 20, 2007	Good start, but listen to Mr. Apoth... He is Maze Master! by Leblanc4prez on May 20, 2007
apotheosis		May 18, 2007	I like maze stories but this was much to small and with much to little description. Next time try for A LOT more rooms. Use escape artist as a guidline. Also, either a lot more description or images, your choice. by apotheosis on May 18, 2007
Vesnicie		May 18, 2007	It's obvious that angry chickens, time machines and angels can all loop you back to the beginning, but why also the lack of a "minotaur key"? I acknowledge that maze stories are difficult because they're unwieldy and become complex very quickly. But if you're not up to that challenge, don't construct a maze. Also, I really detest being asked in these sorts of stories if I already possess a certain object because, if I don't, it almost always means I'm screwed. Oh, and one more thing. Just because it's a maze doesn't mean you can't make at least some attempt at description. Even in mazes, continuously one-liner rooms just aren't interesting. Why don't you loop yourself back to the beginning and try again? by Vesnicie on May 18, 2007