Lara's debt

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
donteatpoop		Oct 20, 2026	Your prose is pretty solid. There were a number of grammatical errors that were a bit distracting but my two main critiques are: You are giving too many options for each choice. This will make the story spiral out of control and become next to impossible to finish. The rating of Mature seems a bit of an overkill since no illicit details were described. A mature rating tends to indicate a certain level of graphic content. by donteatpoop on Oct 20, 2026
laurendoesitall		Aug 7, 2026	Hello, I just finished reading your story, and I absolutely adored it! Your writing is incredible, and I couldn’t stop imagining how fantastic it would look as a comic. I’m a professional commissioned artist, and I’d be thrilled to adapt your story into a comic format. No pressure, of course. I just think your work would shine in that medium. If you’re interested, feel free to reach out to me on Discord (laurendoesitall) Instagram (elsaa.uwu). Let me know your thoughts! Best, lauren by laurendoesitall on Aug 7, 2026