future perfection

Written by theone3150 / MA: Mature Audiences - Adult / 2.50 (2 ratings) (2)
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KaticaLocke
KaticaLocke		 Feb 20, 2008
by KaticaLocke on Feb 20, 2008
apotheosis
apotheosis		 Jun 5, 2007
I honestly looked up "fictasious" to see if it was a real word. Now maybe you intended to write fictitious but you certainly did not do so.

Anyway, try actually following some of the rules of standard written english, like capitalization.

Also, work on writing a coherent and semienjoyable story.
by apotheosis on Jun 5, 2007

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