Comments & Ratings
||Jun 19, 2019||I think it's a cute and quick story, despite what other people say. The only reason I gave it a lower rating is because of the loose ends. Some of them drive me crazy. I suggest that if someone chooses one of the options that turn the story a way you don't want it to go, simply just make it one of the endings. Otherwise, good story!|
||Mar 18, 2014|
||Oct 9, 2011||Once again the comments have been funny enough for me to bump up the rating one point.|
||May 20, 2011||TheCandyMan: Woops. Let me rephrase that: So...I basically had oven baked bread topped with tomatoes and pepperoni.|
||May 20, 2011||
I'm giving you a 3 generously. This has no plot, not detail, no information of any of the characters, not even any of their facial features, their characteristics or anything like it. This is supposed to be a 'Choose Your Own Adventure' site, you give choices but you can only pick 1.. -.-' |
Plus as Yazzman said, you're given the choice to pick on your pizza, cheese. Or pepperoni.
Are you serious, child?
So...I basically had oven baked bread topped with cheese and pepperoni.
Now that's exceptionally unique, I guess that's why I'm giving you a 3.
The ending is giving Andrew a blowjob?!
||Aug 15, 2010|
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||Apr 30, 2010|
||Oct 13, 2009||wow, your a stupid slut|
||Mar 11, 2009|
||Mar 9, 2009||
Fisrt of all, why the hell would you have to choose between having pepperoni or cheese on a pizza? I mean, I searched and searched for an option where I could get both, but there was only "Pepperoni" or "Cheese".|
Am I mispelling pepperoni? Hopefully not.
Anyways, it was ridiculous.
Aside from the whole pizza catastrophe, the story needs more detail and dialogue. Funny ending, though.
||Aug 12, 2008|
||Mar 2, 2008||Very poor writing and rather uninteresting.|
||Nov 16, 2007|
||Oct 25, 2007||I think this story is suposed to be sexy and it just isn't sorry.|
||Jun 22, 2007|
||Mar 24, 2007||OK, this is readable- plus the chick gets eatten out which is a good thing to have in any story. If you keep going and extend the scenes a bit more before offering the choices it would be a bit better. Also, most people don't really care to make choices about the characters food. If you are ready to end a room just use "continue..." or "next page" or something. It doesn't all have to end with a choice. Anyway, I'd read something else written by you. :) And I know a boob tube is usually a strapless shirt.|
||Mar 21, 2007||I was going to give this story a one, but on [url]http://www.infinite-story.com/choice/97983/?room=49383[/url], I say that a woman can wear a boob tube. I idea of wearing a TV is incredible. (I realize you are probably English or Australian or something, were boob tube means something legit)|
||Mar 17, 2007|
||Mar 17, 2007||It is boring, plain and simple. Nothing is happening in this story.|
||Mar 10, 2007||There is only one main path to take on the story, so it's not even an infinite-story until you work harder on it... also you need much more detail, it's much too short and unsatisfying.|