the last of the dragonmen

Written by tye44 / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 2.33 (3 ratings) (3)
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Artazansss
Artazansss		 Oct 16, 2011
Its sad that this story turn out to be so bad the idea of the story is actually very good,but execution was horrible.Writing is bad and plot is pretty much non existent.This story deseves a 2,but because of great idea i give it an extra point 3 from me.
by Artazansss on Oct 16, 2011
apotheosis
apotheosis		 Mar 17, 2007
This is just a horrendous version of Cat2000's Hidden. No detail, lack of plot...no effort... yeah.
by apotheosis on Mar 17, 2007
donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Mar 11, 2007
I think you have a really good idea here that needs expanded on. Your story lacks description, which is essential in writing a good story. Use adjectives, they do wonders. Also, Sentences acutally begin with capital letters.

Normally I would have rated this story a 2, but the potential got you an extra point. Put some more work into your existing pages and you should have a decent story here.
by donteatpoop on Mar 11, 2007

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