Gangsta Life

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Author Rating Date Comment
Madbrad200
Madbrad200
May 22, 2014
Also Unfinished with one plot line.
by Madbrad200 on May 22, 2014
Madbrad200
Madbrad200
May 22, 2014
Kinda funny but ALL the endings are lazy.
by Madbrad200 on May 22, 2014
TheC0mbine
TheC0mbine
Dec 13, 2011
What the fuck is this? Work on your damn Writing sucker.
by TheC0mbine on Dec 13, 2011
Artazansss
Artazansss
Sep 24, 2011
Are this story supposed to be funny?
by Artazansss on Sep 24, 2011
Leblanc4prez
Leblanc4prez
Jun 17, 2007
woah... ling's a bitch huh?
by Leblanc4prez on Jun 17, 2007
Xamiza
Xamiza
Mar 25, 2007
lol
by Xamiza on Mar 25, 2007
Calen
Calen
Mar 10, 2007
Ugh. Now i'm not just rating one because 'everybody's doing it'

You just need... to take a writing class, a poetry class, finish a good portion of school, a grammar class...

No hard feelings, but man... if this is Gangsta Life, write one about real life and i'll rate that. If it's the same quality, my point stands.
by Calen on Mar 10, 2007
LingLing
LingLing
Mar 4, 2007
I would call this absolute fucking shit, but then all the shit in the worlds sewers would sue me for defemation of charecter...
by LingLing on Mar 4, 2007
apotheosis
apotheosis
Mar 4, 2007
This is awful. It is trash, it is is garbage. I would take the time to tear it apart but is there would not be a point. This is beyond saving.
by apotheosis on Mar 4, 2007
donteatpoop
donteatpoop
Mar 3, 2007
Ugh. What a fucking catastrophe. My eyes are going into remission. What the fuck was that?

I know you put it under humor, and I'm sure your idea to write in ebonics seemed clever to you in your head, but trust me when I say that it wasn't.

Instead of writing a potentially amusing story without any semblance of a plotline (yes, I am aware that is a contradiction, but are you?), you put a collection of words into your mouth, chewed them up into bits, digested them, and shat out a mess entitled "Gangsta Life".
by donteatpoop on Mar 3, 2007

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