Gangsta Life
Comments & Ratings
Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
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Madbrad200 |
May 22, 2014 | Also Unfinished with one plot line. | |
Madbrad200 |
May 22, 2014 | Kinda funny but ALL the endings are lazy. | |
TheC0mbine |
Dec 13, 2011 | What the fuck is this? Work on your damn Writing sucker. | |
Artazansss |
Sep 24, 2011 | Are this story supposed to be funny? | |
Leblanc4prez |
Jun 17, 2007 | woah... ling's a bitch huh? | |
Xamiza |
Mar 25, 2007 | lol | |
Calen |
Mar 10, 2007 | Ugh. Now i'm not just rating one because 'everybody's doing it' You just need... to take a writing class, a poetry class, finish a good portion of school, a grammar class... No hard feelings, but man... if this is Gangsta Life, write one about real life and i'll rate that. If it's the same quality, my point stands. |
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LingLing |
Mar 4, 2007 | I would call this absolute fucking shit, but then all the shit in the worlds sewers would sue me for defemation of charecter... | |
apotheosis |
Mar 4, 2007 | This is awful. It is trash, it is is garbage. I would take the time to tear it apart but is there would not be a point. This is beyond saving. | |
donteatpoop |
Mar 3, 2007 | Ugh. What a fucking catastrophe. My eyes are going into remission. What the fuck was that? I know you put it under humor, and I'm sure your idea to write in ebonics seemed clever to you in your head, but trust me when I say that it wasn't. Instead of writing a potentially amusing story without any semblance of a plotline (yes, I am aware that is a contradiction, but are you?), you put a collection of words into your mouth, chewed them up into bits, digested them, and shat out a mess entitled "Gangsta Life". |