Darkness and Light

Written by meteomage / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 6.86 (7 ratings) (7)
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Author Rating Date Comment
Crefix
Crefix		 Nov 30, 2010
by Crefix on Nov 30, 2010
dfalan
dfalan		 Nov 11, 2008
by dfalan on Nov 11, 2008
Thiefswipe
Thiefswipe		 Jan 4, 2008
by Thiefswipe on Jan 4, 2008
KatieWroteIt
KatieWroteIt		 Mar 24, 2007
I love Love LOVE vampire stories. This one was fun too. I didn't approach it with any expectations. I like what you did with the story. I really enjoyed it.
by KatieWroteIt on Mar 24, 2007
apotheosis
apotheosis		 Feb 27, 2007
It has potential but needs to be developed more.
by apotheosis on Feb 27, 2007
TyCamden
TyCamden		 Feb 17, 2007
by TyCamden on Feb 17, 2007
donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Feb 14, 2007
I am conflicted. The writing was pretty good, but was more humorous than thrilling. It definately had a light hearted feel to it. You used full sentences, and lenghty rooms, both of which are definate pluses. But I didn't really dig on the story too much, and almost had to force myself to maintain a level of interest at times. Also, how can vampires not kill people and still remain secretive? Don't they still leave two puncture marks on the victims?
by donteatpoop on Feb 14, 2007

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