Darkness and Light
Comments & Ratings
Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
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Crefix![]() |
Nov 30, 2010 | ||
dfalan![]() |
Nov 11, 2008 | ||
Thiefswipe![]() |
Jan 4, 2008 | ||
KatieWroteIt![]() |
Mar 24, 2007 | I love Love LOVE vampire stories. This one was fun too. I didn't approach it with any expectations. I like what you did with the story. I really enjoyed it. | |
apotheosis![]() |
Feb 27, 2007 | It has potential but needs to be developed more. | |
TyCamden![]() |
Feb 17, 2007 | ||
donteatpoop![]() |
Feb 14, 2007 | I am conflicted. The writing was pretty good, but was more humorous than thrilling. It definately had a light hearted feel to it. You used full sentences, and lenghty rooms, both of which are definate pluses. But I didn't really dig on the story too much, and almost had to force myself to maintain a level of interest at times. Also, how can vampires not kill people and still remain secretive? Don't they still leave two puncture marks on the victims? |