Huzaah Of Hudi-Blee-Blah

Written by Serj22 / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
TheCandyMan		May 8, 2011	Hahaha, nice story, Must be finished. :) by TheCandyMan on May 8, 2011
Leblanc4prez		Jun 3, 2007	funny by Leblanc4prez on Jun 3, 2007
donteatpoop		Jan 6, 2007	This reminds me of a story I wrote called "A Crappy Story". The correlation between my story and this one is centered around the poor quality of both stories... Mine was intentional though. by donteatpoop on Jan 6, 2007
apotheosis		Dec 30, 2006	Funny but it wasn't a story. Sort of a like a series of silly half jokes strung together. Go for a coherent plot next time. by apotheosis on Dec 30, 2006
Usoki		Dec 28, 2006	Wow...this... It...ummm... Errrr.... ....Yeah... 'Twas special. But for the most part, you're trying. I'm frightened to say I read all that you had written at the time I'm typing this. And, honestly, you did a good job with your linking. All of the 'eat batteries' options seamlessly linked into its death option, and beating up the neighbor transitioned back onto the couch rather well. Still, this is a rather idiotic and random work, and not all that funny to me. Also, there are several places where you're typing so fast that the room has several rather ridiculous typos. And then there's some of the awkward phrasing that you didn't fix. "whom you killed both of"? The language you just slaughtered left behind orphan children who are, as we speak, planning their revenge on your ignorant soul. All in all, better than I expected, but still not that great. by Usoki on Dec 28, 2006