Bad Day in Hell

Written by Gribble / R: Restricted - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
Thickskullman		Jun 29, 2013	Very well written. Sharp and engaging. Great characterisation and descriptions without being overladen, perfect for a CYOA. Nice storyline and setting. Pity it's a bit short. Where's part 2? by Thickskullman on Jun 29, 2013
me6031		Jul 24, 2011	It was good, but wut happened to the girl nina? by me6031 on Jul 24, 2011
mechano1		Jan 12, 2009	hopefully the second one will come out soon! by mechano1 on Jan 12, 2009
Leblanc4prez		Jun 19, 2007	Eight thumbs up! by Leblanc4prez on Jun 19, 2007
gadz00k		Mar 14, 2007	i like by gadz00k on Mar 14, 2007
kamigawa		Mar 14, 2007	I have to say that this story really cught me :D I can't wait for the next :D :D! by kamigawa on Mar 14, 2007
Marz		Mar 2, 2007	I feel this story does a good job of making the reader care about what choice they should make. by Marz on Mar 2, 2007
jeffisthebest		Dec 20, 2006	Awesome first story, intense action, good dialogue... If you had more description you would've gotten a 9. by jeffisthebest on Dec 20, 2006
apotheosis		Dec 20, 2006	Very very well written, I enjoyed it a lot. I look foward to the next installment. A more detailed plot would have made it a 10. by apotheosis on Dec 20, 2006
Vesnicie		Dec 16, 2006	Really sharp and well-written, not to mention the ever-humorous Sarge. He reminded me a lot of the guy from Fullmetal Jacket... For some reason, the story didn't quite hold my attention as much as it could have. Perhaps some more narrative "padding" would be helpful. Great job, though! by Vesnicie on Dec 16, 2006
Usoki		Dec 15, 2006	I like it! It's a bit linear, and it's sorta disappointing that none of your interactions with Sarge have a major impact on the storyline. Still, it's well written, and though it's perhaps a bit stereotypical in the character choice, it's still fun to read. And the killing spree plotline, though entirely pointless and seemingly spurred from nothing, was awesome. by Usoki on Dec 15, 2006