Comments & Ratings
||Jun 8, 2013|
||Jun 19, 2007||I am the Queen of France!|
||Dec 20, 2006||
I liked it, well-written and with some good choices, although many were perhaps overly mundane.|
It was a good idea.
||Dec 11, 2006||
First and foremost I must state a fatal flaw within your story: It branches off far to quickly and I think you will have a difficult time making it self contained.|
You have the beginnings of a very good story but unless you start merging many plotlines together fast it is going to branch off to quickly for you to ever finish. That said, I thought your writing style was good, not to much description, not to little, it was a good light popcorn reading. It was semi-original, and I can tell that there was certainly effort put into it. Unfortunately, it looks like it hasn't been added to for a few weeks and may be one of those abandon projects. Overall, I rate it a 7, decent but lacks potential for a good finished product.
||Nov 22, 2006||Amazing!|