The Island

Written by popqueen23 / R: Restricted - Adult / 8.00 (4 ratings) (4)
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Author Rating Date Comment
Crunchyfrog
Crunchyfrog		 Jan 25, 2010
Shame this one died so long ago. A simple story that kept moving, although I couldn't see where it was going.
by Crunchyfrog on Jan 25, 2010
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest		 Dec 20, 2006
Very good description. Good idea for a story too.
by jeffisthebest on Dec 20, 2006
JeepNixon92
JeepNixon92		 Nov 28, 2006
by JeepNixon92 on Nov 28, 2006
Usoki
Usoki		 Nov 12, 2006
This is actually pretty good! I'm not one for survival stories, but it's clear you've put some effort into this one. Some of the events seem a little stretched for a story as realistic as yours, but it's not over the top. And, although a few of your rooms don't have much detail, you consistantly have at least a paragraph per room, which is nice.

All in all, a well written piece.
by Usoki on Nov 12, 2006

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