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Night Drive

Written by topitzman / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 2.00 (4 ratings) (4)
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Author Rating Date Comment
TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan		 Sep 26, 2011
Lacks; nearly everything, though I am impressed by your grammar. I'm certain that the only reason that you don't have any 'loose ends' is due to the fact that every page holds a single sentence, so, extra points are completely unreasonable. The events are completely random, the plotline isn't even coherent, and it's as even more bland than oatmeal porridge.
by TheCandyMan on Sep 26, 2011
apotheosis
apotheosis		 Jun 3, 2007
I'll break it down, you start out with a 10.

Plot dances on the line of not existing to just being terrible -5

Very short, little effort went into making this -3

Unoriginal, just like many other bad stories -3

I did not encounter any loose ends, and this is rare +2

You used complete sentences +2
by apotheosis on Jun 3, 2007
Vesnicie
Vesnicie		 May 21, 2007
Who needs hallucinogenic drugs when you have stories like this?

You get one extra point for non-atrocious grammar.
by Vesnicie on May 21, 2007
Calen
Calen		 May 1, 2007
Only because the 'slap the cigarette out of his hand' was funny
by Calen on May 1, 2007

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