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When the snow falls.

Written by Slasher / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
zaxoman		Sep 3, 2009	This is a good story. However, it was completely linear, and that I didn't like. I like a little variety in a CYOA. However, you would be a great short story writer, and I advise you to take that step in your career. Good luck! by zaxoman on Sep 3, 2009
Calen		Mar 13, 2007	Normally i'd give it a lower score, but Apoth is right- it does have a nice touch to it. The problem is the other fact- that it is basically a short story, not a choose your own adventure type. by Calen on Mar 13, 2007
apotheosis		Oct 22, 2006	This is a difficult story to rate. Nothing really happens in the story, but that is part of its charm. It is a psychological thriller and all the horror is in your own head. This is a very classic way of looking at horror before graphic details and in the case of movies cheesy special effects took over. I miss this type of genre because the imagination is much better than anything that can be spoon fed to you. Still, there are several problems. There isn't a terrible amount of effort, it is short and there really isn't much to it. It really isn't even a choose your own ending because it all funnels to the same choice anyway. Also, it lacks detail and plot. There is no character development and not much background. You are just sorta thrown in the middle of a sparsely described storyline. Overall, I'd give the story a 4. BUT, you get two bonus points for the aformentioned (see first paragraph) and another point because it is actually finished. Therefore, I rate it a seven. by apotheosis on Oct 22, 2006
jeffisthebest		Oct 21, 2006	Overall, okay. Your story is very linear and you often confuse "of" and "have." But otherwise good, I suppose. More description would also have been appreciated. by jeffisthebest on Oct 21, 2006