d day 1

Written by sbuts1234 / PG-13: Parents Strongly Cautioned / 6.00 (2 ratings) (2)
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donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Oct 20, 2026
How are you going to rate your own story four times and still not give it a 10? lol

So an important part of the English language is that we use capital letters at the start of our sentences. It feels like maybe you don’t yet have a firm grasp on grammar. Keep working at it.
by donteatpoop on Oct 20, 2026
sbuts1234
sbuts1234		 Sep 14, 2022
genaric anime moan
by sbuts1234 on Sep 14, 2022
sbuts1234
sbuts1234		 Sep 12, 2022
very good
by sbuts1234 on Sep 12, 2022
sbuts1234
sbuts1234		 Sep 12, 2022
pretty good
by sbuts1234 on Sep 12, 2022
sbuts1234
sbuts1234		 Sep 12, 2022
very good lets me shoot anyone horrible gramer but very good
by sbuts1234 on Sep 12, 2022

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