Comments & Ratings
|Not offensive enough but funny as hell 6/10|
|SO funny! I don't agree that it should have one good ending, because not every story ends well. I loved it's hilarity and lessons, although I'm a little confused as to your purpose; to actually teach a lesson, to write a funny story, or something else?|
|You are one thoroughly fucked up individual.|
|Some gramacle errors but It is funny in most areas. It is rather offesive but in a funny way!|
Haha, well said, shouldn't be kept for granted. |
And now I know.
Again, this is late because I've only just read this, but...|
Hey dipshit, I put up a fucking WARNING on the fist damn page!
With Death Song you had a slightly more valid excuse for whining, but with this one you went ahead and ignored the fucking warning and bitched about something you knew was going to offend you.
Again, you're either a masochist or a fucking moron.
Whether I'm an " evil sadist" or not really isn't the issue here, since I gave fair warning beforehand. You got nobody but yourself to blame for this one fucktard.
WTF, I thought I was a negative, pessimistic person, but you seem to be it because you like it!!! How could you write something liek this?! WTF is wrong with you?! What is wrong with the world?! This is just sick and wrong and evil. I'm not some puritane christian twat, I don't dissaprove of the individual events and endings you write about, what I despise is that you're just being destructive, you're not presenting any good sides, you seem to just be making fun of people that get problems and have unhappy lifes. That makes you the saddes kind of person. Are you a fucking psycopath? Don't words like empathy and compassion ring a bell?|
Ok, I might be ufair and overreacting, I only quickly run through the female storyline and I just finished your Death Song story and wrote a comment about that. But I must say, BAD impression. I have been feeling bad all day and I decided to read your stories hoping I'd feel better but I ended up feeling worse.
And even with Death Song it's not like I didn't enjoy the story, I did, that's why I read the whole of it and rated it 9 when I was in the middle of it. But you've fucked up, you've given your readers a total anticlimax. Your'e a sadist with your audience.
Fuck you again you stupid jerk!!!
And now I know!|
This should be required reading for all High Schoolers.
|Pretty good but I've seen better|
|Bahahahaha any way to win?|
|And knowing is half the battle!|
|You definitely have a warped and twisted sense of humor . . . as do I. Thanks for the story. I laughed my ass off.|
Extremely funny, and extremely moral-y.|
|Oh my! This story makes me think back on my teen years as a golden era of peace and tranquility. So thanks, End, for helping us all heal our old (or not so old) wounds through your, um, SHOCK THERAPY.|
This is a nice, story (honestly).|
But I agree with someone that mentioned this before... there should be at least ONE good ending!
|Words cannot describe how awesome this is. My favorite path is the school shooting one. Utterly hilarious. Brilliant, wonderful, 10/10 easy.|