Comments & Ratings
|I hated this story totally not worth the time|
|I reached an unfinished choice way to quickly. Actually work on the story more instead of abandoning it. It is the equivalent of forcing a woman into labor when she is four months pregnant and calling it a story.|
I look forward to when this story has more than 15 rooms in it.
|Very Avant-Garde. I look forward to reading more of this when it gets bigger.|