A text adventure in fifteen steps.

Written by cyber95 / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 4.25 (4 ratings) (4)
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Hellokitty1234
Hellokitty1234		 Jan 30, 2019
I hated this story totally not worth the time
by Hellokitty1234 on Jan 30, 2019
apotheosis
apotheosis		 Jan 4, 2007
I reached an unfinished choice way to quickly. Actually work on the story more instead of abandoning it. It is the equivalent of forcing a woman into labor when she is four months pregnant and calling it a story.
by apotheosis on Jan 4, 2007
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest		 Dec 21, 2006
Very Avante-Gay.

I look forward to when this story has more than 15 rooms in it.
by jeffisthebest on Dec 21, 2006
Leblanc4prez
Leblanc4prez		 Sep 17, 2006
Very Avant-Garde. I look forward to reading more of this when it gets bigger.
by Leblanc4prez on Sep 17, 2006

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