Lost in a Good Book- A Child's Tale

Written by KatieWroteIt / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
Thickskullman		May 30, 2013	Interesting and well written. A pity it's unfinished. by Thickskullman on May 30, 2013
urnam0		Apr 1, 2009	Too incomplete, it's like looking at half a masterpiece by urnam0 on Apr 1, 2009
Vesnicie		May 24, 2007	Brava on a job well done! The characters were all intricate (that's a fancy word for interesting!) and I agree that you really captured the child's perspective quite well. This story makes me want to dig up my old silver-sequined princess dress and play make-believe! Not that it would fit anymore...adulthood sucks. Anyway, I would give this story a "9" for a couple grammar and spelling errors that I think you easily would have picked up on with another read-through. However, I too am trying to compensate for Michael's utterly inexplicable 1. So 10 it is! by Vesnicie on May 24, 2007
LingLing		Mar 4, 2007	I like this story, Mike is a bitch eh? by LingLing on Mar 4, 2007
EndMaster		Jan 4, 2007	Hmm, I see that Princess Michael is PMSing again, well I guess I'll balance out his mood swing... by EndMaster on Jan 4, 2007
michaelrayholt		Jan 3, 2007	Feeling froggy? So am I, then. by michaelrayholt on Jan 3, 2007
jeffisthebest		Sep 27, 2006	Kate. You are amazing. by jeffisthebest on Sep 27, 2006
apotheosis		Sep 14, 2006	Very well done. You put the story together very well and were consistent throughout. The different stories were very good, I particularly liked Where's Waldo... probably because I liked those books a lot as a child. by apotheosis on Sep 14, 2006
Usoki		Sep 3, 2006	I'm impressed. Most of the mini-stories are highly amusing. (Particularly Where's Waldo and HP) And the ones I didn't find as amusing were the ones to which I didn't know the allusion you were making. But even those were enjoyable enough that I had no desire to stop reading. The frame story also comes across very well. You do a nice job of presenting it from a child's point of view. I'm not quite sure where you're heading with it, or how many more days you'll be adding before you end the story, but it's still impressive as is. by Usoki on Sep 3, 2006
donteatpoop		Sep 1, 2006	Wow. Very nice work. I am very impressed with your capabilities. The idea behind this alone was very well thought out and was presented superbly. Great job. by donteatpoop on Sep 1, 2006