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Lost in a Good Book- A Child's Tale

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Author Rating Date Comment
Thickskullman
Thickskullman
May 30, 2013
Interesting and well written. A pity it's unfinished.
by Thickskullman on May 30, 2013
urnam0
urnam0
Apr 1, 2009
Too incomplete, it's like looking at half a masterpiece
by urnam0 on Apr 1, 2009
Vesnicie
Vesnicie
May 24, 2007
Brava on a job well done! The characters were all intricate (that's a fancy word for interesting!) and I agree that you really captured the child's perspective quite well. This story makes me want to dig up my old silver-sequined princess dress and play make-believe! Not that it would fit anymore...adulthood sucks.

Anyway, I would give this story a "9" for a couple grammar and spelling errors that I think you easily would have picked up on with another read-through. However, I too am trying to compensate for Michael's utterly inexplicable 1. So 10 it is!
by Vesnicie on May 24, 2007
LingLing
LingLing
Mar 4, 2007
I like this story, Mike is a bitch eh?
by LingLing on Mar 4, 2007
EndMaster
EndMaster
Jan 4, 2007
Hmm, I see that Princess Michael is PMSing again, well I guess I'll balance out his mood swing...
by EndMaster on Jan 4, 2007
michaelrayholt
michaelrayholt
Jan 3, 2007
Feeling froggy? So am I, then.
by michaelrayholt on Jan 3, 2007
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest
Sep 27, 2006
Kate. You are amazing.
by jeffisthebest on Sep 27, 2006
apotheosis
apotheosis
Sep 14, 2006
Very well done. You put the story together very well and were consistent throughout. The different stories were very good, I particularly liked Where's Waldo... probably because I liked those books a lot as a child.
by apotheosis on Sep 14, 2006
Usoki
Usoki
Sep 3, 2006
I'm impressed. Most of the mini-stories are highly amusing. (Particularly Where's Waldo and HP) And the ones I didn't find as amusing were the ones to which I didn't know the allusion you were making. But even those were enjoyable enough that I had no desire to stop reading.

The frame story also comes across very well. You do a nice job of presenting it from a child's point of view. I'm not quite sure where you're heading with it, or how many more days you'll be adding before you end the story, but it's still impressive as is.
by Usoki on Sep 3, 2006
donteatpoop
donteatpoop
Sep 1, 2006
Wow. Very nice work. I am very impressed with your capabilities. The idea behind this alone was very well thought out and was presented superbly. Great job.
by donteatpoop on Sep 1, 2006

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