Comments & Ratings
||May 30, 2013||Interesting and well written. A pity it's unfinished.|
||Apr 1, 2009||Too incomplete, it's like looking at half a masterpiece|
||May 24, 2007||
Brava on a job well done! The characters were all intricate (that's a fancy word for interesting!) and I agree that you really captured the child's perspective quite well. This story makes me want to dig up my old silver-sequined princess dress and play make-believe! Not that it would fit anymore...adulthood sucks.|
Anyway, I would give this story a "9" for a couple grammar and spelling errors that I think you easily would have picked up on with another read-through. However, I too am trying to compensate for Michael's utterly inexplicable 1. So 10 it is!
||Mar 4, 2007||I like this story, Mike is a bitch eh?|
||Jan 4, 2007||Hmm, I see that Princess Michael is PMSing again, well I guess I'll balance out his mood swing...|
||Jan 3, 2007||Feeling froggy? So am I, then.|
||Sep 27, 2006||Kate. You are amazing.|
||Sep 14, 2006||Very well done. You put the story together very well and were consistent throughout. The different stories were very good, I particularly liked Where's Waldo... probably because I liked those books a lot as a child.|
||Sep 3, 2006||
I'm impressed. Most of the mini-stories are highly amusing. (Particularly Where's Waldo and HP) And the ones I didn't find as amusing were the ones to which I didn't know the allusion you were making. But even those were enjoyable enough that I had no desire to stop reading.|
The frame story also comes across very well. You do a nice job of presenting it from a child's point of view. I'm not quite sure where you're heading with it, or how many more days you'll be adding before you end the story, but it's still impressive as is.
||Sep 1, 2006||Wow. Very nice work. I am very impressed with your capabilities. The idea behind this alone was very well thought out and was presented superbly. Great job.|