Comments & Ratings
|This is such a sad story...no happy endings. The only problem with this story is that it's not really a CYOA story- more like a traditional story with a few hastily made choices at the end with a few throwaway endings. Also some typos.|
This is one of my favorite stories on the site. I'm giving it a nine because I think it could be expanded- there should be a way to end up with your old body and not be in servitude. Perhaps the option to trick Reggie somehow after you get his body. It should be easy to do this, just delete the last room and add some more. Just my opinion, anyway. |
Still, it's a great idea and carried out beautifully. Good job.
|Excellent story, well written and entertaining while still providing an insightful social commentary. Good job.|
|This is one of the most interesting stories on the site. The basic concept of it was very strange and creative. Nice work.|
|I read this awhile back, but of course that was in my non-rating days. Good job another 9 for you!|
|I thought I already rated this. Either way, I sent you what I thought about it in a PM.|