Will Richard Save the Day on his Day Off? You Decide!

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Author Rating Date Comment
Thickskullman
Thickskullman
May 25, 2013
Excellent work. Far better than most other stories on this site.
by Thickskullman on May 25, 2013
Xt1000305
Xt1000305
May 19, 2012
by Xt1000305 on May 19, 2012
Xt1000305
Xt1000305
May 19, 2012
Unexpected ending, great game and writing
by Xt1000305 on May 19, 2012
Dan2
Dan2
Sep 20, 2006
Excellent story. Keep writing!
by Dan2 on Sep 20, 2006
donteatpoop
donteatpoop
Jun 15, 2005
Only thing I didn't like was the title. It seemed kind of cheesey. Sorry. The story is great, though. Excelent quality.
by donteatpoop on Jun 15, 2005
TimeBelly
TimeBelly
Feb 16, 2005
Great story! I had fun!
by TimeBelly on Feb 16, 2005
digitalKoRn
digitalKoRn
Feb 4, 2005
Very fun ... I had to restart a few times. Very well written and it flowed very nicely.

I loved it! :)
by digitalKoRn on Feb 4, 2005
dragon05
dragon05
Feb 17, 2004
I like this story. Very good descripitions. I can't put my finger on what I didn't like though
by dragon05 on Feb 17, 2004
Benway
Benway
Feb 5, 2004
This is a really great sci-fi action story. It's well written and paced, with some nice atmospheric detail. The battle is well planned and works as much like a game as anything. Also the different restart points are a good idea.
by Benway on Feb 5, 2004

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