Will Richard Save the Day on his Day Off? You Decide!
Comments & Ratings
| Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
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| Thickskullman |
May 25, 2013 | Excellent work. Far better than most other stories on this site. | |
| Xt1000305 |
May 19, 2012 | ||
| Xt1000305 |
May 19, 2012 | Unexpected ending, great game and writing | |
| Dan2 |
Sep 20, 2006 | Excellent story. Keep writing! | |
| donteatpoop |
Jun 15, 2005 | Only thing I didn't like was the title. It seemed kind of cheesey. Sorry. The story is great, though. Excelent quality. | |
| TimeBelly |
Feb 16, 2005 | Great story! I had fun! | |
| digitalKoRn |
Feb 4, 2005 | Very fun ... I had to restart a few times. Very well written and it flowed very nicely. I loved it! :) |
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| dragon05 |
Feb 17, 2004 | I like this story. Very good descripitions. I can't put my finger on what I didn't like though | |
| Benway |
Feb 5, 2004 | This is a really great sci-fi action story. It's well written and paced, with some nice atmospheric detail. The battle is well planned and works as much like a game as anything. Also the different restart points are a good idea. |