The girl next door

Written by Storm / G: General Audiences / 1.67 (3 ratings) (3)
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TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan		 Jul 27, 2011
Uninteresting. I dislike what I am attempting to read right now. I'm sorry, but this is just far from my tastes.

A two for effort..Though.

Why am I so generous? It's aberrant!
by TheCandyMan on Jul 27, 2011
Fezero
Fezero		 Apr 9, 2009
by Fezero on Apr 9, 2009
Calen
Calen		 Mar 11, 2007
Grammar needs to be severely edited. Not all words have to be capitalized. Also, the story was difficult to figure out what on earth was going on.
by Calen on Mar 11, 2007

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