Comments & Ratings
||Oct 17, 2017||It is an amazing story but blonde is feminine try blond. Please continue to update the story.|
||May 4, 2010||I like it.|
||Mar 28, 2008||Great story...keep writing.|
||Feb 2, 2007||Not sure why this is getting rated so low, It's not really bad and it's one of the better Romance stories we have on here.|
||Feb 1, 2007||the quick marriage makes absoulutely no sense|
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||May 11, 2006||
I'm giving you this 10 to offset the undeserved 6 that Jeff gave you.|
Jeff, you are a glib, incompetent bastard sometimes - and I hate you! I HATE YOU!
Ahem! *adjusts his tie*
This story was great, especially for a first attempt. There were a few minor grammatical glitches, but they were just that: MINOR.
Truth be told, I'd probably give the story a 9 if not for Jeff's HORRIBLE rating, but only because Romance really isn't my cup of tea.
I love the attention to detail. You use mere filthy mortal words to weave a tapestry of brilliance. Whatever the Hell that means. I did not find myself 'speed reading' through the story, but rather basking in it's glory and savoring each and every word as if it is a morsel of prime filet mignon melting in my mouth.
Oh, and one more thing, why is this story rated MA? I think you might want to rate it 'R'.
||May 9, 2006||
I could not help but start speed reading this story. It seemed like every single line just rushed me to the next, not by talent but by simplicity.|
That said, this is a good first story.