The knights Lady

Written by foxydwarf / MA: Mature Audiences - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
krazeekitty		Oct 17, 2017	It is an amazing story but blonde is feminine try blond. Please continue to update the story. by krazeekitty on Oct 17, 2017
chosenone		May 4, 2010	I like it. by chosenone on May 4, 2010
tedhyu		Mar 28, 2008	Great story...keep writing. by tedhyu on Mar 28, 2008
EndMaster		Feb 2, 2007	Not sure why this is getting rated so low, It's not really bad and it's one of the better Romance stories we have on here. by EndMaster on Feb 2, 2007
ravenrebelle		Feb 1, 2007	the quick marriage makes absoulutely no sense by ravenrebelle on Feb 1, 2007
neon725		Dec 5, 2006	by neon725 on Dec 5, 2006
jp33		May 22, 2006	by jp33 on May 22, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby		May 11, 2006	I'm giving you this 10 to offset the undeserved 6 that Jeff gave you. Jeff, you are a glib, incompetent bastard sometimes - and I hate you! I HATE YOU! Ahem! adjusts his tie Anyway... This story was great, especially for a first attempt. There were a few minor grammatical glitches, but they were just that: MINOR. Truth be told, I'd probably give the story a 9 if not for Jeff's HORRIBLE rating, but only because Romance really isn't my cup of tea. I love the attention to detail. You use mere filthy mortal words to weave a tapestry of brilliance. Whatever the Hell that means. I did not find myself 'speed reading' through the story, but rather basking in it's glory and savoring each and every word as if it is a morsel of prime filet mignon melting in my mouth. Oh, and one more thing, why is this story rated MA? I think you might want to rate it 'R'. by ChubbyTeletubby on May 11, 2006
jeffisthebest		May 9, 2006	I could not help but start speed reading this story. It seemed like every single line just rushed me to the next, not by talent but by simplicity. That said, this is a good first story. by jeffisthebest on May 9, 2006