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The knights Lady

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Author Rating Date Comment
krazeekitty
krazeekitty
Oct 17, 2017
It is an amazing story but blonde is feminine try blond. Please continue to update the story.
by krazeekitty on Oct 17, 2017
chosenone
chosenone
May 4, 2010
I like it.
by chosenone on May 4, 2010
tedhyu
tedhyu
Mar 28, 2008
Great story...keep writing.
by tedhyu on Mar 28, 2008
EndMaster
EndMaster
Feb 2, 2007
Not sure why this is getting rated so low, It's not really bad and it's one of the better Romance stories we have on here.
by EndMaster on Feb 2, 2007
ravenrebelle
ravenrebelle
Feb 1, 2007
the quick marriage makes absoulutely no sense
by ravenrebelle on Feb 1, 2007
neon725
neon725
Dec 5, 2006
by neon725 on Dec 5, 2006
jp33
jp33
May 22, 2006
by jp33 on May 22, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby
ChubbyTeletubby
May 11, 2006
I'm giving you this 10 to offset the undeserved 6 that Jeff gave you.

Jeff, you are a glib, incompetent bastard sometimes - and I hate you! I HATE YOU!

Ahem! *adjusts his tie*

Anyway...

This story was great, especially for a first attempt. There were a few minor grammatical glitches, but they were just that: MINOR.

Truth be told, I'd probably give the story a 9 if not for Jeff's HORRIBLE rating, but only because Romance really isn't my cup of tea.

I love the attention to detail. You use mere filthy mortal words to weave a tapestry of brilliance. Whatever the Hell that means. I did not find myself 'speed reading' through the story, but rather basking in it's glory and savoring each and every word as if it is a morsel of prime filet mignon melting in my mouth.

Oh, and one more thing, why is this story rated MA? I think you might want to rate it 'R'.
by ChubbyTeletubby on May 11, 2006
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest
May 9, 2006
I could not help but start speed reading this story. It seemed like every single line just rushed me to the next, not by talent but by simplicity.

That said, this is a good first story.
by jeffisthebest on May 9, 2006

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