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Ground Zero

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Author Rating Date Comment
Velizarchik
Velizarchik
Jul 12, 2022
by Velizarchik on Jul 12, 2022
Velizarchik
Velizarchik
Jul 12, 2022
by Velizarchik on Jul 12, 2022
Erminus
Erminus
Dec 8, 2021
Definitely one of the best stories I’ve read
by Erminus on Dec 8, 2021
Zero118
Zero118
Feb 18, 2021
by Zero118 on Feb 18, 2021
enterpride
enterpride
Feb 18, 2021
by enterpride on Feb 18, 2021
Wizal
Wizal
Jan 27, 2021
by Wizal on Jan 27, 2021
antscoff
antscoff
Dec 10, 2020
An involved story about a nuke going off that yields Fallout-style effects. Paths are deep and satisfyingly complex, varied and you have control as a player (i.e. you're not constantly facepalming at how inadequate your own character is in doing things). It isn't narrated in a depressed fashion, which is a pitfall of some apocalyptic stories that can drag the atmosphere. There are images throughout the story as well, which are nice and add to the feel. As with all long stories I've read by EndMaster so far, there are slips in the technical spelling/grammar details now and then, but it's all backseat to the story. Great stuff. 10/10.
by antscoff on Dec 10, 2020
Starbourne
Starbourne
Nov 27, 2020
by Starbourne on Nov 27, 2020
PerforatedPenguin
PerforatedPenguin
Nov 22, 2020
by PerforatedPenguin on Nov 22, 2020
Ineffable
Ineffable
Aug 14, 2020
by Ineffable on Aug 14, 2020
Triclops
Triclops
Jan 15, 2020
I was first introduced to Endmaster through this story, Necromaster, and Eternal. I love these works of art so much.
by Triclops on Jan 15, 2020
Bucky
Bucky
Jan 14, 2020
Bethesda should hire End to work on Fallout.
by Bucky on Jan 14, 2020

Jan 13, 2020
by on Jan 13, 2020
TurnipBandit
TurnipBandit
Nov 22, 2019
by TurnipBandit on Nov 22, 2019
C11302
C11302
Nov 21, 2019
My personal favorite of EndMaster's works and a masterpiece of interactive fiction. Great game, play it if you haven't.
by C11302 on Nov 21, 2019
C6H8O6
C6H8O6
Nov 21, 2019
I love science fiction and this story is just so good. Find every epilogue. And also play the Wasteland Bastard path. It’s amazing
by C6H8O6 on Nov 21, 2019
TheChef
TheChef
Nov 21, 2019
by TheChef on Nov 21, 2019
DerPrussen
DerPrussen
Nov 21, 2019
This is a great CYOA. Give it a go and see if you can keep yourself and the survivors around you alive.
by DerPrussen on Nov 21, 2019
poisonmara
poisonmara
Nov 19, 2019
by poisonmara on Nov 19, 2019
venyanwarrior
venyanwarrior
Nov 19, 2019
nuclear apocalypse yay
by venyanwarrior on Nov 19, 2019
mizal
mizal
Nov 19, 2019
This is still my favorite post apoc story of all time. If you read just one Endmaster story (before reading all of the others) make it this one.
by mizal on Nov 19, 2019
ninjapitka
ninjapitka
Sep 5, 2019
Only a liberal would rate this below a 10.
by ninjapitka on Sep 5, 2019
mizal
mizal
Sep 1, 2019
by mizal on Sep 1, 2019
Cricket
Cricket
Aug 27, 2019
by Cricket on Aug 27, 2019
Dameon
Dameon
Sep 30, 2018
this is the best cyoa i've ever read i think i've read it 20 times and still absolutely love it!!
by Dameon on Sep 30, 2018
mizal
mizal
Jul 26, 2017
by mizal on Jul 26, 2017
Riku918
Riku918
Aug 13, 2014
Great story, options and length. Thanks!
by Riku918 on Aug 13, 2014
Thickskullman
Thickskullman
Sep 1, 2013
This is really good. Found all four of the "100 years later" endings, and each is satisfying in its own way.
by Thickskullman on Sep 1, 2013
bartman608
bartman608
Sep 8, 2011
by bartman608 on Sep 8, 2011
bartman608
bartman608
Sep 8, 2011
i have to say this was better than anything i have ever read even though some of the names were used from fallout i love it and feel this is the best story ive read in a long time thank you for making this story and making my day a little less unbarable

oh and i want to say this is a 5 star story
by bartman608 on Sep 8, 2011
Silverwood
Silverwood
Mar 18, 2011
Absolutely amazing. Riveting story, absolutely *no* loose plot ends and extremely well-developed multiple endings make this Mass Effect tribute a pleasure to read. 10/10, hands down.
by Silverwood on Mar 18, 2011
theone123
theone123
Nov 11, 2010
this is the fuckin best story in the WORLD!!!!!!!!
by theone123 on Nov 11, 2010
Celvis
Celvis
Aug 18, 2010
Very well written
by Celvis on Aug 18, 2010
silentninja
silentninja
May 3, 2010
wow
by silentninja on May 3, 2010
DeDiBit
DeDiBit
Mar 18, 2010
Nice world you've created here. Different paths can be completely different experiences and usually utilize the major elements of the overarching world quite nicely.
by DeDiBit on Mar 18, 2010
infernalbovine
infernalbovine
Mar 4, 2010
Nice
by infernalbovine on Mar 4, 2010
infernalbovine
infernalbovine
Mar 4, 2010
Dammit i was eaten by fucking cannibals!
by infernalbovine on Mar 4, 2010
bsal
bsal
Feb 2, 2010
Man, here i am (AGAIN) giving you a 10 for your excellent story (AGAIN!!!). You probably are the best writer in this site. I can even dare to say you could have your stories published and they would be very successful. Congratulations (AGAIN)!
by bsal on Feb 2, 2010
AStreamOfStars
AStreamOfStars
Jan 19, 2010
There is little doubt in my mind this is the best story i have read, and ever will read on this site (sorry apoth).Everything is planned out damn near perfectly, and the only flaw is a missing epilogue. Not much to complain about when normally you don't even get an epilogue.
by AStreamOfStars on Jan 19, 2010
vancelandow
vancelandow
Oct 7, 2009
Simply amazing. Personally, it is my favorite story here. Although there are some typing mistakes each page. I am sure that is only because you were typing it quickly though.
by vancelandow on Oct 7, 2009
supersam499
supersam499
Mar 14, 2009
Awesome job, one of my personal favorites.
by supersam499 on Mar 14, 2009
mechano1
mechano1
Jan 12, 2009
by mechano1 on Jan 12, 2009
Jargner
Jargner
Nov 14, 2008
Terrific story, End! (Then again, almost all of your stories are great, which fills me with pain, which causes me to cut my wrists at night.) The pictures are a big plus, the possibilities are sorta kinda believable are pretty cool, and the Fallouty feel is also a big plus. Basically, 10/10!
by Jargner on Nov 14, 2008
Amalek88
Amalek88
Oct 21, 2008
by Amalek88 on Oct 21, 2008
Ramidel
Ramidel
Oct 20, 2008
Excellent story.

Major problem is that the Individual Shelter game is waaay undeveloped and utterly unlinked to the rest of the world. When you leave the shelter, the game ends; you don't even get to arrive with RockerChick. You and RockerChick never have anything to do with the Combine either.

May be the point but it's still "meh."
by Ramidel on Oct 20, 2008
Deathknight13
Deathknight13
Jul 8, 2008
A very good story, first story I ever read on this site, totally complete and gave realistic endings, I really felt like depending on what I did something that felt real was going to happen.
Great job
by Deathknight13 on Jul 8, 2008
gameshark1313
gameshark1313
Jun 11, 2008
I always love a good End of the World story. Fantastic job!
by gameshark1313 on Jun 11, 2008
Riven
Riven
Mar 9, 2008
by Riven on Mar 9, 2008
max
max
Feb 16, 2008
by max on Feb 16, 2008
Eichel
Eichel
Dec 14, 2007
by Eichel on Dec 14, 2007
shadowzxv
shadowzxv
Dec 14, 2007
Lovin the fallout and I am legend-ish themes. an amazing piece of realistic writing. What theF*#%! is up with CaseyJones though?
by shadowzxv on Dec 14, 2007
vegabond213
vegabond213
Oct 30, 2007
by vegabond213 on Oct 30, 2007
urnam0
urnam0
Oct 3, 2007
This story was epic. It is all a choose your own adventure story should be, and more. I'm gonna stop right here cuz if I went on and on I wouldn't get any sleep for a few days. I would pay for a book version of this story.
by urnam0 on Oct 3, 2007
Ryldix
Ryldix
Sep 20, 2007
The story kept me hooked all the way through until the end. You have some serious writing talent.
by Ryldix on Sep 20, 2007
BurntFlower
BurntFlower
Jun 29, 2007
This is my second favorite story of yours (though it's certainly up to par to Necromancer). Asides from a few minor grammatical and spelling mistakes, I see nothing wrong with your story.

Bravo on another great work. :)
by BurntFlower on Jun 29, 2007
Qflingspoo
Qflingspoo
Apr 7, 2007
I stumbled onto this site a year ago. This is my Favorite story. Thanks for writing it!!
by Qflingspoo on Apr 7, 2007
spartan008
spartan008
Mar 20, 2007
GREAT STORY!!!
by spartan008 on Mar 20, 2007
metalcrisis
metalcrisis
Feb 26, 2007
This kicks... so much ass...
Some of the pictures take away from the dramatic feel of the story, I suggest changing them or removing them.
by metalcrisis on Feb 26, 2007
KatieWroteIt
KatieWroteIt
Jan 7, 2007
Since everyone seems to either love or hate this story, and I love it i figured it needs a 10.
by KatieWroteIt on Jan 7, 2007
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest
Jan 4, 2007
by jeffisthebest on Jan 4, 2007
Sostenuto
Sostenuto
Jan 4, 2007
by Sostenuto on Jan 4, 2007
michaelrayholt
michaelrayholt
Jan 3, 2007
Feeling froggy? So am I, then.
by michaelrayholt on Jan 3, 2007
donteatpoop
donteatpoop
Jan 3, 2007
You're slipping, End. That's three 10's for you in two days. You really should have deleted these by now. Mwahahaha.
by donteatpoop on Jan 3, 2007
apotheosis
apotheosis
Jan 3, 2007
It is most certainly among the greatest. Definitely deserves a 10, and End, don't delete the ratings this time!
by apotheosis on Jan 3, 2007
DarkMagnus
DarkMagnus
Jan 2, 2007
Simply put the greatest thing on this site.
by DarkMagnus on Jan 2, 2007

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