Ground Zero

Written by EndMaster / R: Restricted - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Velizarchik	Jul 12, 2022	by Velizarchik on Jul 12, 2022
Velizarchik	Jul 12, 2022	by Velizarchik on Jul 12, 2022
Erminus	Dec 8, 2021	Definitely one of the best stories I’ve read by Erminus on Dec 8, 2021
Zero118	Feb 18, 2021	by Zero118 on Feb 18, 2021
enterpride	Feb 18, 2021	by enterpride on Feb 18, 2021
Wizal	Jan 27, 2021	by Wizal on Jan 27, 2021
antscoff	Dec 10, 2020	An involved story about a nuke going off that yields Fallout-style effects. Paths are deep and satisfyingly complex, varied and you have control as a player (i.e. you're not constantly facepalming at how inadequate your own character is in doing things). It isn't narrated in a depressed fashion, which is a pitfall of some apocalyptic stories that can drag the atmosphere. There are images throughout the story as well, which are nice and add to the feel. As with all long stories I've read by EndMaster so far, there are slips in the technical spelling/grammar details now and then, but it's all backseat to the story. Great stuff. 10/10. by antscoff on Dec 10, 2020
Starbourne	Nov 27, 2020	by Starbourne on Nov 27, 2020
PerforatedPenguin	Nov 22, 2020	by PerforatedPenguin on Nov 22, 2020
Ineffable	Aug 14, 2020	by Ineffable on Aug 14, 2020
Triclops	Jan 15, 2020	I was first introduced to Endmaster through this story, Necromaster, and Eternal. I love these works of art so much. by Triclops on Jan 15, 2020
Bucky	Jan 14, 2020	Bethesda should hire End to work on Fallout. by Bucky on Jan 14, 2020
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TurnipBandit	Nov 22, 2019	by TurnipBandit on Nov 22, 2019
C11302	Nov 21, 2019	My personal favorite of EndMaster's works and a masterpiece of interactive fiction. Great game, play it if you haven't. by C11302 on Nov 21, 2019
C6H8O6	Nov 21, 2019	I love science fiction and this story is just so good. Find every epilogue. And also play the Wasteland Bastard path. It’s amazing by C6H8O6 on Nov 21, 2019
TheChef	Nov 21, 2019	by TheChef on Nov 21, 2019
DerPrussen	Nov 21, 2019	This is a great CYOA. Give it a go and see if you can keep yourself and the survivors around you alive. by DerPrussen on Nov 21, 2019
poisonmara	Nov 19, 2019	by poisonmara on Nov 19, 2019
venyanwarrior	Nov 19, 2019	nuclear apocalypse yay by venyanwarrior on Nov 19, 2019
mizal	Nov 19, 2019	This is still my favorite post apoc story of all time. If you read just one Endmaster story (before reading all of the others) make it this one. by mizal on Nov 19, 2019
ninjapitka	Sep 5, 2019	Only a liberal would rate this below a 10. by ninjapitka on Sep 5, 2019
mizal	Sep 1, 2019	by mizal on Sep 1, 2019
Cricket	Aug 27, 2019	by Cricket on Aug 27, 2019
Dameon	Sep 30, 2018	this is the best cyoa i've ever read i think i've read it 20 times and still absolutely love it!! by Dameon on Sep 30, 2018
mizal	Jul 26, 2017	by mizal on Jul 26, 2017
Riku918	Aug 13, 2014	Great story, options and length. Thanks! by Riku918 on Aug 13, 2014
Thickskullman	Sep 1, 2013	This is really good. Found all four of the "100 years later" endings, and each is satisfying in its own way. by Thickskullman on Sep 1, 2013
bartman608	Sep 8, 2011	by bartman608 on Sep 8, 2011
bartman608	Sep 8, 2011	i have to say this was better than anything i have ever read even though some of the names were used from fallout i love it and feel this is the best story ive read in a long time thank you for making this story and making my day a little less unbarable oh and i want to say this is a 5 star story by bartman608 on Sep 8, 2011
Silverwood	Mar 18, 2011	Absolutely amazing. Riveting story, absolutely no loose plot ends and extremely well-developed multiple endings make this Mass Effect tribute a pleasure to read. 10/10, hands down. by Silverwood on Mar 18, 2011
theone123	Nov 11, 2010	this is the fuckin best story in the WORLD!!!!!!!! by theone123 on Nov 11, 2010
Celvis	Aug 18, 2010	Very well written by Celvis on Aug 18, 2010
silentninja	May 3, 2010	wow by silentninja on May 3, 2010
DeDiBit	Mar 18, 2010	Nice world you've created here. Different paths can be completely different experiences and usually utilize the major elements of the overarching world quite nicely. by DeDiBit on Mar 18, 2010
infernalbovine	Mar 4, 2010	Nice by infernalbovine on Mar 4, 2010
infernalbovine	Mar 4, 2010	Dammit i was eaten by fucking cannibals! by infernalbovine on Mar 4, 2010
bsal	Feb 2, 2010	Man, here i am (AGAIN) giving you a 10 for your excellent story (AGAIN!!!). You probably are the best writer in this site. I can even dare to say you could have your stories published and they would be very successful. Congratulations (AGAIN)! by bsal on Feb 2, 2010
AStreamOfStars	Jan 19, 2010	There is little doubt in my mind this is the best story i have read, and ever will read on this site (sorry apoth).Everything is planned out damn near perfectly, and the only flaw is a missing epilogue. Not much to complain about when normally you don't even get an epilogue. by AStreamOfStars on Jan 19, 2010
vancelandow	Oct 7, 2009	Simply amazing. Personally, it is my favorite story here. Although there are some typing mistakes each page. I am sure that is only because you were typing it quickly though. by vancelandow on Oct 7, 2009
supersam499	Mar 14, 2009	Awesome job, one of my personal favorites. by supersam499 on Mar 14, 2009
mechano1	Jan 12, 2009	by mechano1 on Jan 12, 2009
Jargner	Nov 14, 2008	Terrific story, End! (Then again, almost all of your stories are great, which fills me with pain, which causes me to cut my wrists at night.) The pictures are a big plus, the possibilities are sorta kinda believable are pretty cool, and the Fallouty feel is also a big plus. Basically, 10/10! by Jargner on Nov 14, 2008
Amalek88	Oct 21, 2008	by Amalek88 on Oct 21, 2008
Ramidel	Oct 20, 2008	Excellent story. Major problem is that the Individual Shelter game is waaay undeveloped and utterly unlinked to the rest of the world. When you leave the shelter, the game ends; you don't even get to arrive with RockerChick. You and RockerChick never have anything to do with the Combine either. May be the point but it's still "meh." by Ramidel on Oct 20, 2008
Deathknight13	Jul 8, 2008	A very good story, first story I ever read on this site, totally complete and gave realistic endings, I really felt like depending on what I did something that felt real was going to happen. Great job by Deathknight13 on Jul 8, 2008
gameshark1313	Jun 11, 2008	I always love a good End of the World story. Fantastic job! by gameshark1313 on Jun 11, 2008
Riven	Mar 9, 2008	by Riven on Mar 9, 2008
max	Feb 16, 2008	by max on Feb 16, 2008
Eichel	Dec 14, 2007	by Eichel on Dec 14, 2007
shadowzxv	Dec 14, 2007	Lovin the fallout and I am legend-ish themes. an amazing piece of realistic writing. What theF*#%! is up with CaseyJones though? by shadowzxv on Dec 14, 2007
vegabond213	Oct 30, 2007	by vegabond213 on Oct 30, 2007
urnam0	Oct 3, 2007	This story was epic. It is all a choose your own adventure story should be, and more. I'm gonna stop right here cuz if I went on and on I wouldn't get any sleep for a few days. I would pay for a book version of this story. by urnam0 on Oct 3, 2007
Ryldix	Sep 20, 2007	The story kept me hooked all the way through until the end. You have some serious writing talent. by Ryldix on Sep 20, 2007
BurntFlower	Jun 29, 2007	This is my second favorite story of yours (though it's certainly up to par to Necromancer). Asides from a few minor grammatical and spelling mistakes, I see nothing wrong with your story. Bravo on another great work. :) by BurntFlower on Jun 29, 2007
Qflingspoo	Apr 7, 2007	I stumbled onto this site a year ago. This is my Favorite story. Thanks for writing it!! by Qflingspoo on Apr 7, 2007
spartan008	Mar 20, 2007	GREAT STORY!!! by spartan008 on Mar 20, 2007
metalcrisis	Feb 26, 2007	This kicks... so much ass... Some of the pictures take away from the dramatic feel of the story, I suggest changing them or removing them. by metalcrisis on Feb 26, 2007
KatieWroteIt	Jan 7, 2007	Since everyone seems to either love or hate this story, and I love it i figured it needs a 10. by KatieWroteIt on Jan 7, 2007
jeffisthebest	Jan 4, 2007	by jeffisthebest on Jan 4, 2007
Sostenuto	Jan 4, 2007	by Sostenuto on Jan 4, 2007
michaelrayholt	Jan 3, 2007	Feeling froggy? So am I, then. by michaelrayholt on Jan 3, 2007
donteatpoop	Jan 3, 2007	You're slipping, End. That's three 10's for you in two days. You really should have deleted these by now. Mwahahaha. by donteatpoop on Jan 3, 2007
apotheosis	Jan 3, 2007	It is most certainly among the greatest. Definitely deserves a 10, and End, don't delete the ratings this time! by apotheosis on Jan 3, 2007
DarkMagnus	Jan 2, 2007	Simply put the greatest thing on this site. by DarkMagnus on Jan 2, 2007

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