where is jack stones father
Comments & Ratings
| Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
|---|---|---|---|
| apotheosis |
Dec 13, 2006 | Poor grammar, linear plot, no character development, not enjoyable... not really much of anything. More effort please. | |
| jeffisthebest |
May 1, 2006 | I'm feeling some anti-capital letter sentiment in this story. |