the perfect murder

Written by wilio / R: Restricted - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
Calen		Jan 18, 2008	What exactly am I reading? A plethora of grammatical errors is an understatement >_> Good idea though, try again when you can get uh, better... skill by Calen on Jan 18, 2008
apotheosis		Feb 27, 2007	"Note from author: I just started the story yesterday, so don't expect this to be finnish in 2 days or less. It will have at least 150 rooms(well that's my goal)" I'm sorry to break the news but... this story is far from 150 rooms and you did not start it yesterday. I think you feel far short of your goal. If you ever do add onto the story feel free to delete this rating. Also, a plethora of grammatical mistakes. by apotheosis on Feb 27, 2007