Black Orchid

Written by CaptainJack / G: General Audiences / 5.00 (1 ratings) (1)
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apotheosis
apotheosis		 Jun 27, 2007
I would have liked you to reveal what is going on more in the beginning, give more of an intro or at least add description as time goes on so the reader knows what the heck is happening.
by apotheosis on Jun 27, 2007

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