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Jun 29, 2013
by Thickskullman on Jun 29, 2013
Apr 17, 2013
So far it seems pretty good; I hope you finish it
by YaoiBloodhound on Apr 17, 2013
Sep 6, 2007
You're still one of my favorite writers on the site, and this is exactly why. You are paint the scene from an emotional level so that the reader is almost forced to bond with the character they choose. You are magnificent. Unfortunately, you rarely finish a story, and it is disappointing for your readers.
by donteatpoop on Sep 6, 2007
Sep 7, 2006
I have always loved this Anime. In the show Zanza was always my fave.

I like the Idea of a fighting fantasy style story.
by Leblanc4prez on Sep 7, 2006
Mar 21, 2006
The writing is flawless and full of emotion.

I must once again beg the differ with my esteemed peer homer and give you a well-deserved 10, cat.
by ChubbyTeletubby on Mar 21, 2006
Feb 26, 2006
Aight, wee bit to say.

Overall, yeah, definitely a story worthy of an 8. But to tell why it's a 7:

Starts out 8.

-1 for being Manga=7
+1 for that amazing disclaimer. I am not being sarcastic. I loved that, and it should be on 1/2 of all the stories on this site there's so much fan fic
-1 because it's a stat story and well...Tom Cruise doesn't really look like a samurai. Sorry.

Another problem: stat stories need mucho rooms.

However, the outstanding feeling is positive. This was a good story. Hopefully you will continue. Now to reread the story and try to figure out why it is an R, based on what I've read it's G or PG...
by jeffisthebest on Feb 26, 2006

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