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by Cricket on Aug 27, 2019
by Gower on Aug 27, 2019
Simply outstanding work EndMaster, I found it entertaining, and it seemed to pull me in, I felt the tension as I read through the entire story, I'll be sure to return to see the other endings. Even though shorter than expected, I enjoyed it thoroughly, it's one of my favourites on this site. 10/10.
by TheCandyMan on Aug 4, 2011
Great story really enjoyed reading it couple times
by KingMalice on May 9, 2010
Don't you just hate those bastards that rate your stories 6 for no reason?

Well I'm rating you a ten, because this has long been one of my favorites on the site. Came upon it again by looking at a random story. Wondered why it had a 7.7 instead of a 9-10. Good job man.
by Calen on Jan 20, 2008
by Cab on Aug 16, 2007
Wicked entertaining story. Some of it reminded me of Carnivale (the HBO series, if you haven't seen it check it out), but it was pulled off well. The whole story had a controlled tension that set me on nerve, so great job setting up the uncomfortable atmosphere. To think the Infinite Writing Tournament (an idea of mine, mind you) could have spawned such amazing stories as this is a testament to the genious of the person who came up with the idea for a tournament.
by donteatpoop on Jan 12, 2007
by jeffisthebest on Jan 4, 2007

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