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Suzy’s Strange Saga

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zio860
zio860
Jan 21, 2022
by zio860 on Jan 21, 2022
Zero118
Zero118
Feb 18, 2021
by Zero118 on Feb 18, 2021
enterpride
enterpride
Feb 18, 2021
by enterpride on Feb 18, 2021
Wizal
Wizal
Jan 27, 2021
by Wizal on Jan 27, 2021
antscoff
antscoff
Jan 2, 2021
Finished. SSS is a heavyweight clocking in at over 300,000 words. Everything is consistent between branches. Actions you perform on Suzy's behalf are reflected in changes to her personality, and you get to see many sides to her character. The depth shown in characters and their dialog really drew me in as it does in other Endmaster stories. I recommend at least playing to an epilogue for all 3 starting options. The plot can change well between branches thanks to the length of the story, such that each major starting option builds up a whole collection of events and setting details local only to itself -- at the same time, everything remains interconnected and branches reference events between each other.

Keep in mind SSS can be pretty dark, with sex and murder showing up variously throughout. As long as you don't mind that and loose grammar, the story is rich and detailed, with lots of space for dialog, spoken and internal.
by antscoff on Jan 2, 2021
antscoff
antscoff
Dec 10, 2020
The depth of characters in this story is very high. I've read most branches in the game, but not all of them yet. I would easily recommend this at 10/10. I may later come back with a detailed review (and for other places I've rated).
by antscoff on Dec 10, 2020
Starbourne
Starbourne
Nov 27, 2020
by Starbourne on Nov 27, 2020
PerforatedPenguin
PerforatedPenguin
Nov 22, 2020
by PerforatedPenguin on Nov 22, 2020
Ineffable
Ineffable
Aug 14, 2020
by Ineffable on Aug 14, 2020
Triclops
Triclops
Jan 15, 2020
by Triclops on Jan 15, 2020
Bucky
Bucky
Jan 14, 2020
It's beautiful seeing Suzy all grown up.
by Bucky on Jan 14, 2020

Jan 13, 2020
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TurnipBandit
TurnipBandit
Nov 22, 2019
by TurnipBandit on Nov 22, 2019
C6H8O6
C6H8O6
Nov 21, 2019
Better crossover than Infinity War
by C6H8O6 on Nov 21, 2019
C11302
C11302
Nov 21, 2019
by C11302 on Nov 21, 2019
TheChef
TheChef
Nov 21, 2019
by TheChef on Nov 21, 2019
venyanwarrior
venyanwarrior
Nov 19, 2019
by venyanwarrior on Nov 19, 2019
mizal
mizal
Nov 19, 2019
Should be read after Endmaster's other stories written by this date, for the full effect of the references.
by mizal on Nov 19, 2019
ninjapitka
ninjapitka
Nov 19, 2019
by ninjapitka on Nov 19, 2019
Cricket
Cricket
Aug 27, 2019
by Cricket on Aug 27, 2019
betaomgea
betaomgea
Apr 29, 2015
very good author I enjoy the stories you have posted on this site and I like that there are many choices I just wish there were more endings then just one that could be considered a "good ending"
by betaomgea on Apr 29, 2015

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