Innkeeper

Written by EndMaster / R: Restricted - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
musicaladie33	Jul 17, 2021	Only read a few lines, but it's missing punctuation and just talking heads. I have a feeling that's going to be most of the stories on this site though, but I guess we'll see. by musicaladie33 on Jul 17, 2021
hjklion	Mar 12, 2021	Good short story by hjklion on Mar 12, 2021
Zero118	Feb 18, 2021	by Zero118 on Feb 18, 2021
enterpride	Feb 18, 2021	by enterpride on Feb 18, 2021
Wizal	Jan 27, 2021	by Wizal on Jan 27, 2021
antscoff	Dec 10, 2020	by antscoff on Dec 10, 2020
Starbourne	Nov 27, 2020	by Starbourne on Nov 27, 2020
PerforatedPenguin	Nov 22, 2020	by PerforatedPenguin on Nov 22, 2020
PerforatedPenguin	Nov 18, 2020	by PerforatedPenguin on Nov 18, 2020
Ineffable	Aug 14, 2020	by Ineffable on Aug 14, 2020
Justforfunnnn	Mar 31, 2020	Literally the most thrilling and detailed story ever! by Justforfunnnn on Mar 31, 2020
Corgi289	Feb 17, 2020	If I remember correctly, Innkeeper was the first story by EndMaster I ever read, but I have not read it since until now. I remember enjoying it and now see that it has certainly lived up to, and perhaps exceeded my memory of it. It is especially amusing to reread this after having read Rogues not too long ago, especially the parts with Flameflower. There are so many parts of Innkeeper I had forgotten that were referenced in Rogues, and I already want to read Rogues again because of that. The characters in Innkeeper might be one of my favorite things about it. They turn a decent game about running an inn into the great story that it is. I felt as if I could picture them all in my head well, especially Wendy, and the attitude everyone had towards Cindy was hilarious. The story itself is good to and certainly well-written, but it’s the characters that really make it. There were a lot of moments that made me laugh. Taking Rita’s advice to have the employees of the other inn disfigured being an option among the choices was certainly not among the least of these. “(Your liver is useless though)” This aside was another great moment, as was the main character admiring how Olaf is able to restrain himself from breaking bones in order to distract himself from the beating he was receiving was another one. Because the story has very little rejoining of branches, it is definitely worth going back and making every choice. A lot of the ends are similar, but because the events leading up to those ends are always different, that does not make the story dull after a few endings. My favorite end would probably be the one in which he becomes a mad scientist and dies a peaceful death. This is a story that probably deserves a good bit more recognition than it actually gets. While it is in the fantasy section, the fantasy elements are generally quite light, and it is definitely more like a regular story of a guy trying to run a business that happens to be set in a fantasy universe than some fantasy sword and sorcery adventure. If you aren’t that into the latter type of story, that will not prevent you from enjoying Innkeeper. Thanks for a great story! by Corgi289 on Feb 17, 2020
Triclops	Jan 15, 2020	by Triclops on Jan 15, 2020
Bucky	Jan 14, 2020	Highly entertaining, but I was hoping to get a free beer recipe. by Bucky on Jan 14, 2020
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TurnipBandit	Nov 22, 2019	by TurnipBandit on Nov 22, 2019
C11302	Nov 21, 2019	by C11302 on Nov 21, 2019
C6H8O6	Nov 21, 2019	by C6H8O6 on Nov 21, 2019
TheChef	Nov 21, 2019	by TheChef on Nov 21, 2019
venyanwarrior	Nov 19, 2019	by venyanwarrior on Nov 19, 2019
mizal	Nov 19, 2019	If you like this you should read Rogues, which is sort of a sequel: http://chooseyourstory.com/Story/Rogues.aspx Although Rogues is a half a million word epic, and I always appreciated the low key and grounded nature of Innkeeper. by mizal on Nov 19, 2019
ninjapitka	Sep 10, 2019	by ninjapitka on Sep 10, 2019
Cricket	Aug 27, 2019	by Cricket on Aug 27, 2019
SteveFreeling	Nov 4, 2016	by SteveFreeling on Nov 4, 2016
NerdInABush	Sep 18, 2016	One of the best stories I have read on here so far (but I'm new) by NerdInABush on Sep 18, 2016
Bladeninja76	Mar 27, 2014	It's hard to believe that managing an inn and taking university classes is possible. Strangely enough, the hectic nature of this story adds to the immersion since you focus on many factors and the consequences of the decisions you make. Your endings are also interesting, even if most of them are very similar. Who knew such a good Infinite Story was possible with mostly one setting. by Bladeninja76 on Mar 27, 2014
Thickskullman	Jul 6, 2013	by Thickskullman on Jul 6, 2013
EndMaster	Sep 20, 2011	Testing the new comments section. by EndMaster on Sep 20, 2011
mal99	Feb 11, 2011	by mal99 on Feb 11, 2011

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