Booty Call

Written by hungo / G: General Audiences /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
SteveFreeling		Mar 4, 2016	What the hell is this? by SteveFreeling on Mar 4, 2016
magic		Jul 22, 2009	So damn inapproite for a rated G story. Cool, great job, awseome, I love it. It sounds like you need a new life. Enjoy living like Jake and I hope your next story a little less crappier. by magic on Jul 22, 2009
Dan2		Jun 2, 2007	Yeah, the actual games are definitely better. You probably should have created your own Jake stories, at least that would have been more interesting. But the way you change around writing tenses is so confusing it pretty much makes this story one that most are just going to give up on. by Dan2 on Jun 2, 2007
Leblanc4prez		May 27, 2007	I have never been so ashamed of a story in all my life. by Leblanc4prez on May 27, 2007
JohnJohnson		Jan 8, 2006	Do us all a favor and die. by JohnJohnson on Jan 8, 2006
jeffisthebest		Nov 27, 2005	Whoah!!!!! I am like champion! Yo hungo! Check out Score! It's awful, but it kicks your stories booty! Oh what pun (that's the title of your story!) by jeffisthebest on Nov 27, 2005
michaelrayholt		Oct 31, 2005	DEP, you were too kind. "Hungo", there's a place for ebonics in these kinds of stories: it's called QUOTATIONS. Narrators don't talk like they can't pass ghetto grade-school English. To take a quote from your idiotic story: "You got assed out. Start over, bitch!" by michaelrayholt on Oct 31, 2005
donteatpoop		Oct 29, 2005	Poorly written story on a completely unorignal theme. I almost shot myself in the head after reading it before I realised that it wasn't my fault for trying to read it, it's your fault for wrting garbage like this. What did you do, spend 5 minutes on this story? by donteatpoop on Oct 29, 2005