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Written by donteatpoop / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested
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donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Jan 31, 2008
I am about to delete the ratings, but wanted razmans comments to be somewhere since he was kind enough to leave some. His rating was a 9, but as I mentioned in the description it's not ready to be rated:

razman - Well done, poop. This is a great story, with plenty of description and a brilliant story, overall. You should be proud, although there are a few spellings errors, likely to be caused by carelessness and not deliberate. You may want to think about raising the maturity rating slightly, due to the awesome descriptive deaths and the gruesome cannibalism of Vladamir. (That is one sick, messed-up guy!)
by donteatpoop on Jan 31, 2008
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donteatpoop		 Feb 6, 2007
Poop here. I guess these comments are sort of anonymous unless you inroduce yourself. The creator of Pheonix Stalker is michaelrayholt, the creator of Dr. Metzger is EndMaster.
by donteatpoop on Feb 6, 2007
michaelrayholt
michaelrayholt		 Nov 14, 2005
Since there'll be no way to identify the contributors, (and for those who don't recognize my influence on the writing) I thought it appropriate to mention here that I was the originator of Phoenix Stalker.

And as far as I know, Endmaster did Dr. Metzger. If he wants to post a comment, he knows where these silly things are.

Once again, big thanks go out to DEP for this sweet idea. I'm sure we'll all enjoy working on it.
by michaelrayholt on Nov 14, 2005

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