Shadows Of The Lost

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
TheCandyMan	Jun 20, 2011	Incredible. It's been 5 years from now, yet..It still hasn't been finished. It appears you have abandoned it. Let's just say that was the end of this, I'll give you a 9. by TheCandyMan on Jun 20, 2011
druidwolf	Mar 21, 2006	Looking forward to more of this highly engaging storyline. Excellent detail and character development. by druidwolf on Mar 21, 2006
donteatpoop	Jan 15, 2006	Akira, you did an amazing fucking job here. All of your rooms were detailed and clearly described the characters perspective, thoughts, and emotions. Brilliant work... However, your co-writer didn't have much if any detail in his rooms. The "What shoudl I eat" room was the worst of all. It really detracted from the overall sense of tension the story otherwise conveys. Maybe you can edit the shit out of it and make it more presentable? (No offense Lablanc, the rooms you did just need more details and more logical choices.) by donteatpoop on Jan 15, 2006
jeffisthebest	Jan 14, 2006	Indeed, so far so good, but there just isn't enough! by jeffisthebest on Jan 14, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby	Jan 13, 2006	So far so good. Keep up the good work. by ChubbyTeletubby on Jan 13, 2006