Shadows Of The Lost

Written by Akira / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 8.60 (5 ratings) (5)
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TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan		 Jun 20, 2011
Incredible. It's been 5 years from now, yet..It still hasn't been finished. It appears you have abandoned it. Let's just say that was the end of this, I'll give you a 9.
by TheCandyMan on Jun 20, 2011
druidwolf
druidwolf		 Mar 21, 2006
Looking forward to more of this highly engaging storyline. Excellent detail and character development.
by druidwolf on Mar 21, 2006
donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Jan 15, 2006
Akira, you did an amazing fucking job here. All of your rooms were detailed and clearly described the characters perspective, thoughts, and emotions. Brilliant work...

However, your co-writer didn't have much if any detail in his rooms. The "What shoudl I eat" room was the worst of all. It really detracted from the overall sense of tension the story otherwise conveys. Maybe you can edit the shit out of it and make it more presentable? (No offense Lablanc, the rooms you did just need more details and more logical choices.)
by donteatpoop on Jan 15, 2006
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest		 Jan 14, 2006
Indeed, so far so good, but there just isn't enough!
by jeffisthebest on Jan 14, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby
ChubbyTeletubby		 Jan 13, 2006
So far so good. Keep up the good work.
by ChubbyTeletubby on Jan 13, 2006

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