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The better way of Splap

Written by splapped / NR: Not Rated / 6.67 (3 ratings) (3)
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Leblanc4prez
Leblanc4prez		 Jun 17, 2007
I am the queen of france!
by Leblanc4prez on Jun 17, 2007
donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Jul 6, 2005
This is indeed far better than the original Splap. Granted, it is not the greatest story on the site but I doubt strongly that Splapped was striving for ground breaking material here. It had a few amusing moments, which is what put the story over the half way mark for me. Nothing outstandingly funny, but an amusing concept. Another advantage this has over the original is that parts of this were readable.
by donteatpoop on Jul 6, 2005
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest		 Jun 30, 2005
Enh I guess this WAS better than the original...not that that's hard to do. I wonder how you came up with Splap...there's Splash Laptop, which could have sexual undertones, there's Special Lapdance, which definitely has an entendre, and there's the misspelling of slap, of course. Which could also be related to sex you perv.
by jeffisthebest on Jun 30, 2005

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