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Written by VKellogg / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 8.50 (2 ratings) (2)
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donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Jul 16, 2005
Very well written, good detail and description. Felt like all was lost, all was hopeless. Outstanding job. You rock.
by donteatpoop on Jul 16, 2005
ChubbyTeletubby
ChubbyTeletubby		 Jul 4, 2005
Do you, perhaps, watch Jack Van Impe? This is a well-written story, just a little played out. I don't think the EU is the menace many fundamentalist Christians think it is.

But don't get me wrong, I'm no fan of Europe or it's social trends. Keep adding on to the story, you've got a good start. I'm an open-minded guy. The future could bring anything. I just think way too many Christians in this day and age think they got it all figured out.
by ChubbyTeletubby on Jul 4, 2005

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