Comments & Ratings
||Oct 20, 2011||Leah, I can't hear what you're saying. Take those balls out of your mouth.|
||Jun 2, 2009||Very boring. Kinda weird. Your gonna send me a long, boring, e-mail complaining that I gave one of your ''precious stories'' a 1. Well, whatever. But the story needs more rooms, it needs to be finished, it needs a better plot overall. In fact, it needed to not even become a story. Maybe just a commercial. :P A pathetic, sad commercial.|
||Sep 15, 2007||Always thought this one was underrated. Definitely another good one to work on when you have time.|
||May 21, 2007|
||Nov 26, 2006||
I've spent a lot of time just reading the many stories on this site. This one had a unique ability to hold my interest. I think the premise is very interesting, and I'm actually relieved that the protagonist doesn't feel any inclination to become a self-righteous twat.|
There are enough superheroes in the world already.
This story almost felt like the written version of Grand Theft Auto, but smarter. And not as many hookers.
||Sep 23, 2006|
||Jul 5, 2006||
While I can't say I like the direction that you took the story, I can say that you wrote it well. It's an interesting plot device, and you handled it well.|
Still, most of the work is only about gazing into the eyes of random people. As far as actual plot goes, you've still got some work ahead of you on this one.
||Apr 19, 2006||
Can't believe I never read this one.|
I also can't believe this story got such harsh reviews. I, for one, loved it. The story did not progress slowly in my opinion, the room weren't 'too long'.
I have to give it a 10.
Another brilliant achievement. Well done.
||Mar 24, 2006||Very interesting|
||Jan 13, 2006||I love this story! But why is he using his powers for personal gain? Can't he just use it for the good of mankind, sort of like a superhero. =)|
||Dec 31, 2005|
||Jul 1, 2005||
Alright...this would be an excellent story if not for one awful combination.|
And the combination is LONG rooms and a SLOW story. The story does not porgress fast enough, and it is just too apparent you love to write :).
But keep it up man, this story got a 7 because it was good. And you like Simpsons, it's very evident from your stories (Fat Tony, Mr. Burns). I'd like to see Comic Book Guy in your next story. Or perhaps one Dr. Nick Riviera.
||Jun 24, 2005||This was a bunch of crap written by a talentless fool known as donteatpoop. Not bad! :)|
||Jun 16, 2005|
||Jun 7, 2005||Hey, I'm rating myself here. What am I gonna do, give it a 1? If I ain't cheating, I ain't trying.|