Broken Spears

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Feb 17, 2020
Better than most of the stories here, at least it's a cool concept that could make an interesting plot and not some weird shrinking fetish thing for once. It's pretty linear so far and cuts off right when things seem like they're about to happen, but I'd like to see this continued.
by mizal on Feb 17, 2020

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