THE DAY

Written by realmofwonder / NR: Not Rated /

(5)

Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
werecat101	Jun 22, 2013	by werecat101 on Jun 22, 2013
apotheosis	Dec 5, 2006	I like the concept, not enough effort. If you are going to just go over a normal day, either add in a lot more rooms or choices (for something this simple and transparent at least 200-300) or go for better details and descriptions. Over all I'm not impressed. Just sort of like a bad little piece of AMM If you want to write like this but don't feel like writing hundreds of rooms just add on to Another Monday Morning or Hall of Infinite Doors. by apotheosis on Dec 5, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby	May 18, 2005	A little monotonous. Could be better. Parts of it are funny, though. If you polished up the story a little more and made it a little less boring you'd have yourself a real dandy piece of candy. by ChubbyTeletubby on May 18, 2005
jeffisthebest	May 12, 2005	Why are so many stories just about a normal day? They are all the same! Write something interesting, as you dont seem to have a bad style by jeffisthebest on May 12, 2005
Morathi	May 2, 2005	This story gives what it promises: the day. It's a pretty usual day, but with some unusual twists. Good job, I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going. by Morathi on May 2, 2005