What Lies Above

Written by Morathi / NR: Not Rated /

(5)

Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
TheCandyMan	May 31, 2011	This is an honest opinion. It was a great story, but it lacked detail, that's all, except the fact that it's too short to my satisfaction. I was hoping for something more longer, you cut off the story too quickly. But it's a good thought story with great effort, that's why it deserves a good and proper 7. :) by TheCandyMan on May 31, 2011
YazZMaN	Dec 28, 2005	Twas better than average. by YazZMaN on Dec 28, 2005
donteatpoop	Dec 22, 2005	Great premise, but the rooms were barren of any real detail. The endings came up too quickly and were completely unsatisfying, even the happy endings left me wishing there were more to them. by donteatpoop on Dec 22, 2005
jeffisthebest	May 12, 2005	Wow that story reminds me of my own (which is why I like it). You do have some talent, good job by jeffisthebest on May 12, 2005
funkymango	Apr 23, 2005	Very interesting! Has potential. by funkymango on Apr 23, 2005