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TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan
May 31, 2011
This is an honest opinion. It was a great story, but it lacked detail, that's all, except the fact that it's too short to my satisfaction. I was hoping for something more longer, you cut off the story too quickly. But it's a good thought story with great effort, that's why it deserves a good and proper 7. :)
by TheCandyMan on May 31, 2011
YazZMaN
YazZMaN
Dec 28, 2005
Twas better than average.
by YazZMaN on Dec 28, 2005
donteatpoop
donteatpoop
Dec 22, 2005
Great premise, but the rooms were barren of any real detail. The endings came up too quickly and were completely unsatisfying, even the happy endings left me wishing there were more to them.
by donteatpoop on Dec 22, 2005
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest
May 12, 2005
Wow that story reminds me of my own (which is why I like it). You do have some talent, good job
by jeffisthebest on May 12, 2005
funkymango
funkymango
Apr 23, 2005
Very interesting! Has potential.
by funkymango on Apr 23, 2005

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