Hansel And Gretel: The Right Way

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Nov 18, 2019
I was half afraid this was going to be another weird fetishy thing, because I've come across an alarming number of those here. But it's a perfectly wholesome and straightforward retelling. My only complaint in fact is it's all a bit TOO straightforward, when one of the main advantages of a branching story format are having choices that change the story. This is all a bit railroaded, the author doesn't put up with you picking any other choice but what happened in the actual fairy tale...but it's at least pretty upfront about that so it you're reading you know what you're going to get.

This would be educational I suppose to people not familiar with the full version of the original fairytale. The 'right' choices don't really contain any original material, but the wrong ones usually have some humorous comments and are worth checking out. All in all not a waste of ten minutes, it was well done and I'm just happy enough any time I come across some random author with a good grasp of grammar and punctuation and the like.
by mizal on Nov 18, 2019

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