The Walking Dead

Written by razman / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 6.67 (3 ratings) (3)
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Covernant
Covernant		 Apr 29, 2008
by Covernant on Apr 29, 2008
apotheosis
apotheosis		 Jun 4, 2007
Some effort is present, but you should work on the following:

Grammar
Sentence Structure
Tying Up Loose Ends
Compelling Plot
Imagery and Action
Length
by apotheosis on Jun 4, 2007
EndMaster
EndMaster		 Jan 3, 2007
Sort of on the average side. Work on it.
by EndMaster on Jan 3, 2007

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