All Is Fair in Hate

Written by DarkAutumnLeaves / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
apotheosis	Nov 24, 2006	Yes, I will concur with the other two and say you are a good writer but I had to detract two points because of the level of deja vu this story entailed. I feel like I have read the same story many times over, and while this is unique and individual in its own right it is comparable to many other works on this site and for this reason I gave it an 8. Other than that nice job keep up the good work. by apotheosis on Nov 24, 2006
Ella	Jun 13, 2005	by Ella on Jun 13, 2005
Ella	Jun 13, 2005	This is a fantastic story! I can't wait to finish it! :) I love the name, Keiya. I have the page I ended on bookmarked. I'll keep checking back. Love ya! by Ella on Jun 13, 2005
donteatpoop	Jun 9, 2005	To say that you are a good writer would be a gross understatement. You rock out. by donteatpoop on Jun 9, 2005
jeffisthebest	Mar 18, 2005	You are a good writer. That said, you need to work on the structure of your story. The reader will not bother to try to navigate through the maze of unended paths you have created. Add on to another story to get the hang of it. by jeffisthebest on Mar 18, 2005